My father
When I was kids, I used to play and swim in the river. Because the river in my village very clean. Someday my father had known if I always play in the river. He very angry to me, I thought if my father didn't love me because he was angry to me. But when I was adult , I knew everything, he had been angry because he very love and care to me. He doesn't want if I play in the river because that is very dangerous.
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My father
When I was a kid, I used to play and swim in the river, because the river in my village was very clean. One day my father found out that I was playing in the river. He got very angry at me. I thought that my father didn't love me, because he was angry at me. But when I grew up, I knew better. He had been angry because he loved me very much and cared for me. He didn't want me to play in the river, because it was very dangerous.0
Conjugation in English can be tricky, since the words don't always fit together so well. Keep trying and you'll get it right! Until then, here are a few free tips to keep your grammar sharp;
Keep an eye on the tense of a sentence (WHEN something happened/is happening). If it happened in the past, use past tense verbs like was, were, walked, played, and swam. Make sure your nouns are parallel to your verbs. "Kids" is plural, meaning there are more than one. "When we were kids" is the plural past tense of "When I was a kid."
Remember, a sentence in proper English should never begin with a conjunction like But, Or, Yet, So, For, And, or Nor. (Near the end of the list I just gave you, there is a comma called the "Oxford Comma," which is not always used, nor do you really need to add it before your coordinating conjunction, which signals the end of the list. I could have written "...But, Or, Yet, So, For, And or Nor." and been perfectly correct.)
I hope all of that wasn't too confusing, and if you would like further explanation, feel free to get hold of me (send me a message), and I'll be happy to elaborate.
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