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Hogwarts is The Best Magic School Ever I insisted that i would receive an admission letter from Hogwarts if the owl could find my home. However, life tell me in the next few years that i'm only an ordinary muggle. So sad. I can think of no better novel than Harry Potter in my reading journey. It's an adventure about integrity, faith, friendship, love and courage. J.K Rowling constructs a totally fantastic magic world for readers all over the world, with a pen and infinite creativity. OMG I love her so much!! However, this series only has seven parts, it's too short for me, for all fans. Fortunately, a new movie named Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them is going to showing in theatre! I can't wait to enjoy it. Though it's not a story about harry, ron and hermione, i still feel exciting. In the prevue, Newt said"Hogwarts is the best magic school in the world", i can't stop my heart, it reminds me of so many happy memories. I hope there is no end in the magic world.

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Hogwarts is The Best Magical School Ever

I insisted that I would receive an admission letter from Hogwarts if the owl could find my home. However, life tell told me in the next few years that I'm only an ordinary muggle. So sad.
I can think of no better novel than Harry Potter in my reading journey. It's an adventure about integrity, faith, friendship, love and courage. J.K Rowling constructs a totally fantastic magical world for readers all over the world, with a pen and infinite creativity. OMG I love her so much!! However, this series only has seven parts, it's too short for me, for all fans.
Fortunately, a new movie named Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them is going to showing in the theatre! I can't wait to enjoy it. Though it's not a story about Harry, Ron and Hermione, I still feel exciteding. In the prevue preview, Newt said "Hogwarts is the best magical school in the world". I can't stop my heart, it reminds me of so many happy memories.
I hope there is no end in to the magical world.

 

This is great! Watch out for capitalisation and tenses though! I saw it last week and really enjoyed it- hope you do too :) 

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