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It is possible to be productive working at home?
Internet and technology have made a revolution in a lot of areas such as medicine, communication and computer science. Nowadays, this impact is almost in every area of business, specially about the time professionals spend at offices. This has change because modern technology allows anyone to work at any place, even at home.
There are a lot of advantages of working at home, for example it is not necessary to lose hours of your day taking public transportation or being in traffic jam to arrive at the office. For companies is worth because they can have less costs with energy supply, infrastructure and Internet access.
Although, there are some problems to employers and staff. There are some tasks that are impossible to do outside the office and companies cannot control what their workers do, that why it is important to have evaluation by results instead of pay them by how long they have worked. For workers, the disadvantages are quite complicated too. They tend to see their domestic accounts, such as energy and Internet, increase in the end of the month.
Home office may not be possible for everyone though. Industry and service workers may have more difficult in this type of work. As an example, it is not possible for a supermarket attendent to work from home or for a president to be outside his company for an entire day.
To summarize, work at home must be a decision take in team, with all the pros and cons listed and discussed between the worker and the company. In that way, both of them can be happy and productive.
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There are a lot of advantages of working at home. For example, it is not necessary to (lose hours of your day) waste time taking public transportation or to get stuck in being in traffic jams to arrive on the way to at the office. For companies, this is beneficial is worth because they can reduce energy have less with energy supply, infrastructure and Internet access costs.
Although, there are some problems to for employers and staff. There are some tasks that are impossible to do outside the office and companies cannot control what their workers do, which that why it is why it is important to have evaluation by results(merit based evaluations) instead of paying them by the hour (how long they have worked). For workers, the disadvantages are quite complicated too. They tend to see their domestic accounts, such as energy and Internet, increase in at the end of the month.
Home offices may not be possible for everyone though. Industry and service workers may have more difficulty in this type of work. As an example, it is not possible for a supermarket attendant to work from home or for a president to be away from outside his company for an entire day.
To summarize, work at home must be a decision taken with a wide perspective take in team, with all the pros and cons listed and discussed between the workers and the company. In that way, both of them can be happy and productive.
Rose, overall rather well written. I would note that you should try to avoid sounding repetitive and try to use a wider range of vocabulary, especially concerning use of conjunctions and connecting phrases(for example, in addition, alternatively, etc). You also tend to use convoluted phrases to get across meanings that can be simplified with singular words, which can purely be helped through additional vocabulary. Keep it up :)
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