Correct a small letter please:)
Hi my friends,
My name is John. I am from Great Britain. We have got a lot of beautiful cities such as London, Liverpool, Newcastle and many others. London is the capital of Great Britain. It is very big city.
But I live in the country. I live with my mum, dad and a little sister in a big house. It has got brown roof and a lot of windows. Our house has got two floors. On the ground floor there is a hall, a kitchen and a small pantry. On the second floor there are our bedrooms. Me bedroom has got a balcony.
There is a high green fence around my house. In front of the fence are a lot of flowers. I can see them from my balcony. On the left from the house there is our fruit garden with apple trees, pear trees and plum trees. There is a large field next to the garden. You can see there our animals. We have got five sheep, two horses and a cow.
On the right from the house is our kitchen-garden. There are two beds with carrots and cabbage and a bed of tomatoes. I like tomatoes very much. And you?
There is a river behind my house. My sister and I swim there in summer. Do you like swim in the river? There is an old bridge over the river. If you go over the bridge and go on the road you get into the forest. In autumn there are a lot of berries and mushrooms in the forest. I like to pick them. What do you like to do in autumn?
Write me about your country and your town, please.
Your John.
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Correct a small letter please:)
Hi my friends,My name is John. I am from Great Britain. We have got a lot of beautiful cities such as London, Liverpool, Newcastle and many others. London is the capital of theGreat Britain. It is a very big city.
But I live in the country. I live with my mum, dad and a little sister in a big house. It has got brown roof and a lot of windows. Our house has got two floors. On the ground floor there is a hall, a kitchen and a small pantry. On the second floor there are our bedrooms. Me bedroom has got a balcony.
There is a high green fence around my house. In front of the fence are a lot of flowers. I can see them from my balcony. On the left from the house there is our fruit garden with apple trees, pear trees and plum trees. There is a large field next to the garden. You can see there our animals. We have got five sheep, two horses and a cow.
On the right from the house is our kitchen-garden. There are two beds with carrots and cabbage and a bed of tomatoes. I like tomatoes very much. And you?
There is a river behind my house. My sister and I swim there in summer. Do you like to swim in the river? There is an old bridge over the river. If you go over the bridge and go on the road you get into the forest. In autumn there are a lot of berries and mushrooms in the forest. I like to pick them. What do you like to do in autumn?
Write me about your country and your town, please.
Your John.
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Correct a small letter please:)
Hi my friends,My name is John. I am from Great Britain. We have got a lot of beautiful cities such as London, Liverpool, Newcastle and many others. London is the capital of Great Britain. It is very big city.
But I live in the country. I live with my mum, dad and a little sister in a big house. It has got brown roof and a lot of windows. Our house has got two floors. On the ground floor there is a hall, a kitchen and a small pantry. On the second floor there are our bedrooms. My bedroom has got a balcony.
There is a high green fence around my house (It is better to say that your house is surrounded by a green fence ). In front of the fence are a lot of flowers (There are a lot of flowers in front of the fence). I can see them from my balcony. On the left from the house (from the left, it overlooks a garden) there is our fruit garden with apple trees, pear trees and plum trees. There is a large field next to the garden. You can see there our animals. We have got five sheep, two horses and a cow.
On the right from the house is our kitchen-garden. There are two beds with carrots and cabbage and a bed of tomatoes. I like tomatoes very much. And you (what about you)?
There is a river behind my house. My sister and I swim there in summer. Do you like swimmingin the river? There is an old bridge over the river. If you go over the bridge and go on the road you get into a forest. In autumn there are a lot of berries and mushrooms in the forest. I like to pick them. What do you like to do in autumn?
Write me about your country and your town, please.
Your John.
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