An unexpected call
It was three o’clock in the morning when the phone rang. Firstly, I believe it was the alarm clock but when I had totally woken up I realise it had been the mobile phone that I had put on the old, black table of the dining room last night. I run towards the table where I had left it, but it had just stopped.
Obviously, I didn’t know the number that I could see on the lighted screen, because neither my family nor my friends had phoned me at three ours in the morning unless it had been a very important or urgent issue.
As soon as I took de phone, it rang another time but before I could answer it stopped. I started to get worried because it was the first time that happened to myself something like that.
Suddenly, I remembered that last day I had asked the doorman of my house to warm myself at three ours, but was for 3 p.m. and not 3 a.m.
Finally, I understood the mistake and became to the bed more relaxed.
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An unexpected call
It was three o’clock in the morning when the phone rang. At first, I believed it was the alarm clock but when I was fully awake I realized it had been the mobile phone that I had put on the old black table in the dining room last night. I ran towards the table where I had left it, but it had just stopped.Obviously, I didn’t know(recognize) the number that I could see on the illuminated screen. None of my family nor my friends would phoned me at three o'clock in the morning unless it had been a very important or urgent issue.
As soon as I left the phone, it rang again but before I could answer, it stopped. I started to get worried because it was the first time that something like that had happened to me.
Suddenly, I remembered that yesterday I had asked the doorman of my house* to call me at three o'clock, but it was for 3 p.m. and not 3 a.m.
Finally, I understood the mistake and returned to my bed more relaxed.
* Maybe it would be better to say 'Apartment building or block' As a house is usually an individual residence without a concierge/doorman.
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An unexpected call
It was three o’clock in the morning when the phone rang. Firstly (or At first), I believed it was the alarm clock but when I had totally woken up I realised it had been the mobile phone that I had put on the old, black table of in the dining room last night. I run ran towards the table where I had left it, but it had just stopped.Obviously, I didn’t know the number that I could see (saw) on the lighted screen, because neither my family nor my friends would have had phoned me at three ours in the morning unless it had been were a very important or urgent issue.
As soon as I took de the phone, it rang another time but before I could answer it stopped. I started to get worried because it was the first time that had happened to myself me, something like that.
Suddenly, I remembered that last day yesterday I had asked the doorman of my house to warm myself at three our o'clock, but it was for 3 p.m. and not 3 a.m.
Finally, I understood the mistake and became went back to the bed more relaxed.
Some errors but no trouble understanding what you meant. Hope this helps.
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