Computer-free days???
Nowadays we are living faster. We usually don’t have enough time for a calm conversation with friends. There are a lot of gadgets around us, which took our time every day: e.g. iPod for listening to music, smart phones to carry on texting, PC for games, chat, e-mail, movies, etc. I got an idea. I want to slow down. I’m going to take a day (it will be Friday) free from computer on every week. I think it would help me to feel more relaxed after a hardworking/busy week. So next week I can focus on my work easier.
What do you think? Do you want to try?
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Computer-free days???
Nowadays we are living faster. We usually don’t have enough time for a calm conversation with friends. There are a lot of gadgets around us, which took take our time every day: e.g. iPod for listening to music, smart phones to carry on texting, PC for games, chat, e-mail, movies, etc. I got an idea. I want to slow down. I’m going to take a day (it will be Friday) free from computer on every week. I think it would help me to feel more relaxed after a hardworking/busy week. So next week I can focus on my work easier more easily.What do you think? Do you want to try?
Very well written, excellent English.
Small suggestion
I want to...., I am going to take..., I think it would... - all present tense. I think 'I have and idea' would be more normal to use here, although 'I got' also makes sense.
Yes, it is a great idea to try.
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