ESSAY: Adventure Tourism
- Do you think adventure tourism in inexplored parts of the world should be encouraged?-
Adventure tourism is gaining importance in the last years as a new form of travel, people likes to live different and exciting things in their free time instead of the traditional ways based on relaxing. This new forms of amusement are usually done in natural places, what can affect the animals and plants that live there.
Human beings have controlled most of superfice of Earth, and this has affected the environtment in a very dangerous ways: pollution, deforestation, floods, forest fires… Some parts of the world luckily have survived the horror human can do in natural places, but they are in danger for the bussiness opportunitys they have, and one of them is tourism. Besides the fact that tourism in inexplored parts can be dangerous for the people that “enjoy” this kind of tourism, this places and their wildlife can be destroyed easily by the human action: cutting down trees, killing animals, river engineering…
Adventure tourism has a lot more of terrible aspects than positive ones, so I think it should be forbidden or just allowed for activities that doesn’t need changes in the natural wildlife.
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ESSAY: Adventure Tourism
- Do you think adventure tourism in unexplored* remote parts of the world should be encouraged?* This word is not appropriate in this situation.
Adventure tourism is gaining importance popularity in the last recent years as a new form of travel, activity. People likes to live experience different and exciting things in their free time instead of the traditional ways based on relaxation. These new forms of amusement/activity are usually done in the natural places, environment and that can affect the animals and plants that live there.
Human beings have controlled most of surface of Earth, and this has affected the environment in a very dangerous serious ways: pollution, deforestation, floods, forest fires… Some parts of the world luckily have survived the horrors that humans can do in natural places, but they are in danger from the business opportunities they create and one of them is tourism. Besides Apart from the fact that tourism in unexplored remote parts can be dangerous for the people that “enjoy” this kind of tourism, these places and their wildlife can be destroyed easily by the human action: cutting down trees, killing animals, river engineering pollution…etc.
Adventure tourism has a lot many more of terrible negative aspects than positive ones, so I think it should be forbidden or just allowed restricted to activities that do not affect the natural wildlife.
_______________ THANK YOU!
Very good, well done.
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