would you please correct as follows, if something wrong. thank you!

would you please correct as follows, if something wrong. thank you!

>I definitely agree that the main reason why businesses and the rich use tax havens is to hide their wealth. There are two important reasons for doing that: to reduce their tax and for legal reasons.

The first reason why I support companies that are using to use tax havens is that they can reduce/decrease their overall expenditure. added expend.>

The first reason is that, by parking their wealth in off-shore accounts, they are able to hide them from the tax authorities, a move which helps to reduce their tax liabilities. The reason is about why there are doing it , not the reasons why you support them.

As a profit organization, companies want to /need to/ create wealth benefits every year constantly. Firms can maximize their profits if any  extra cost  are reduced by using the reasonable way like tax havens.

>As a business organisation, companies have to show profit every year, the more the better. Therefore, they will try to maximise their profit by reducing cost, and if tax havens can provide them with a legal way to reduce their tax, they will be likely to use them.

According to financial research suggests that most firms are likely to invest their plants and equipment by retained earning and that the capacity investments could contribute to a good circle of economy growth.??

> According to some financial research papers, most firms are more likely than not to invest in plants and machineries using their retained profits, and these investments will contribute to the growth of the economy.

Moreover. Cutting unexpected costs are good to employees because they will get more benefits from firms when companies make more income for themselves. X

> Moreover, their cutting down on cost that can be reduced is good for  their employees, because they will get more benefits when their company makes more profit.

Workers know that if they are working harder to achieve stated accomplishments, they will make more profits for companies and that become an incentive for employees

> Workers know that if they work harder at whatever job given of them, they will help their company to make more profit, and this is an incentive for them to do so, for the more the profit, the more the benefit they will get.

I will stop here .

. By contrast, if firms pay much tax which could originally avoid by legal way, it will cause a harmful influence in a numbers of employees that discourage their motivation.
The second reasons is that concerns about firms use a legal way to avoid paying tax. Although some people may say that firms should not use tax havens because of moral turpitude. They must take something wrong with firms. if companies involve in some illegal activities, they will be punished by government for a huge amount of penalty, indeed. However, using tax havens by rightfully establish subsidiary companies in overseas where are more lower tax rates to pay than other countries. A studying from university, it tells that most famous enterprises in the ranking of Fortune Global 500 are put on of their oversea companies into tax havens. That’s what making those companies more fascinating to the investors. Therefore, under legal way, firms have to use tools to manage their profits for investors.