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Please correct my English Please correct my company's answer phone. --------------------------------------------------- Thank you for calling. Our reception time for new customer is from 11 am to 7 pm on Monday and Friday. Please leave a message after the tone. I'll get back to you as soon as possible.

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Hi Atsushi,

Here are my amendments for your consideration :)

---------------------------------------------------
Thank you for calling.
Our reception opening hours time for new customers are from 11 am to 7 pm on Monday and Friday.
Please leave a message after the tone.
I'll get back to you as soon as possible.


Just wanted to check as well if the reception hours are only open on Mondays and Fridays (as indicated above) - or whether it was Monday to Friday (the whole week). 

If the days are Mondays and Fridays only, regularly, you would need to make the weekdays plural (adding an 's'). So the sentence would read:

Our reception opening hours time for new customers are from 11 am to 7 pm on Mondays and Fridays.

Many thanks!

Amy

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