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The best experience I ever had in my life. My most exciting story was when I was fifteen years old, which happened between the towns of the north of Boyaca-Colombia. El Espino and El Cocuy these towns are in boyaca and to arrived it you must go out on the north highway, via Tunja from bogota, the route consists of ten hours on the way by bus, before arriving at Espino. Here in el espino is the town which I started to live extreme sports, such as torrentismo which we did when we went down A waterfall of fifteen meters tied with a rope and all the elements of security to practice this sport. The next day at five in the morning we got up to start the trip to the cocuy which is a few minutes from the town of El Espino, then we start the travel to the cabins of the natural park of Cocuy-Guican, In the huts we start the trekking to the highest peaks which have snow with all our luggage, in the middle of the journey we set up our base camp for the next day climb to the sugar loaf peak one of the highest hills of this mountain range. In this place therer are beautiful lagoons, extraordinary landscapes, although it was not an easy experience, I learned much of this and the landscapes of Boyacá, it was gratifying after so much effort to reach the snow and touch it for the first time in its natural state, It was The best experience I ever had in my life. Correct me, thanks

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The best experience I ever had in my life.

My most exciting story was when I was fifteen years old, and it took place between the northern towns of Boyaca-Colombia. The towns of El Espino and El Cocuy are in boyaca and to reach them you must take the north highway, via Tunja from Bogota. The route consisted of ten hours by bus, before arriving at Espino.  El Espino is the town in which I started to love extreme sports, such as torrentismo. We did this when we went down a waterfall fifteen meters high tied with a rope attached to us, and all the correct saftey precautions in place.

The next day at five in the morning, we got up to start the trip to the cocuy which is a few minutes from the town of El Espino. Then, we began the trip to the cabins of the Cocuy-Guican nature park. In the huts we start the trekking to the highest peaks which have snow with all our luggage,

Acá no me queda muy claro lo que quieres decir, lo siento. Quiza que sea: 'From our huts we began our expedition, up steep slopes covered in snow, carrying all our luggage'.


at the mid-point of our journey we set up our base camp for the next day's climb to the sugar loaf peak of one of the highest hills of this mountain range. Here, there (creo que buscabas the're, que es una contracción de 'they are'.) are beautiful lagoons, extraordinary landscapes, and although it was not an easy experience, I learned a lot about the landscapes of Boyacá; it was gratifying after so much effort to reach the snow and touch it for the first time in its natural state. It was the best experience that I ever have ever had in my life.

Correct me, thanks


Cuidado con el uso de los artículos y preposiciones. Muy bien escrito y un recuerdo fascinante, yo no sabía lo que es torrentismo! Si quieres más ayuda, mándame un mensaje!

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