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Thema: Moldova (i am translated with translator) Her is English and Russian versions Moldova it is a country with a relatively underdevelopment tourism industry in spite of the existence on its territory historical and modern tourism sites. In 2013 the country entered in the top five list of the least visited countries in the world , compiled of the World Bank. The most visited tourist place in Moldova it is the capital, Kishenev. Also, in the point of interest to tourists can select another major city: Tiraspol, Bielci, Bender (Bender’s fortress), Orhei known its medieval town Old Orgei (Orheiul Vechi) and also located on the banks of the Dniester river resort Vadul lui Voda. The main tourist attractions of Moldova include Europe’s wine cellars Cricova and Mileştii Mici and visiting medieval monasteries of Moldova. Besides, Moldova’s sanatoriums in the cities Kamenka, Calarasi and Cahul have the balneary. Left bank of the Dniester River and the city of Bender is outside the control of the Moldovan authorities, and visit these places associated with the intersection of the Dniester security zone controlled by an associate of the russian-moldovan-transnistrian peacekeeping force, as well as obtaining a residence permit on the territory of Transnistria from the local border guards.

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Theme: Moldova (I have used a translator) Here is the English version

Moldova is a country with a relatively underdeveloped tourist industry in spite of its historical and modern tourist sites.
In 2013 the country entered in the top five list of the least visited countries in the world , compiled by the World Bank.
The most visited tourist site in Moldova is its capital, Kishenev.
(Also, other points of interest to tourists is another major city: Tiraspol, Bielci, Bender (Bender’s fortress), Orhei known for its medieval town Old Orgei (Orheiul Vechi) and also located on the banks of the Dniester river resort Vadul lui Voda. )*
The main tourist attractions of Moldova include European wine cellars Cricova and Mileştii Mici, and its medieval monasteries.
Also, Moldova’s sanatoriums in the cities Kamenka, Calarasi and Cahul have the (balneary.?)
on the left bank of the Dniester River. The city of Bender is outside the control of the Moldovan authorities, and visits to those places at the intersection of the Dniester security zone are controlled by an associate of the russian-moldovan-transnistrian peacekeeping force. The visits also need a permit on the territory of Transnistria from the local border guards.**

*it might be good to separate this sentence into several smaller ones.

**it might help to separate this into several smaller sentences.

Very well written!

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