It's my first time to write here In an amazing english class,our handsome teacher named Mike recommends "italki" to us,he says it's not only a software to learn,but also a fantastic place to make frie

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It's my first time to write here In an amazing english class,our handsome teacher named Mike recommends "italki" to us,he says it's not only a software to learn,but also a fantastic place to make friends from all over the world. There's many crazy ideas in my head lately,I am REALLY REALLY NOT good at studying but i have to take an important examination on December 24,OMG,it's CHRISTMAS,I LOVE CHRISTMAS,but i can't even enjoy it,hehehehe,a sad story,isn't it?However,as my friend said,everyone is on the ways to perfect.So i can't stop moving,no pains,no gains. By the way,I LOVE TAYLOR SWIFT!!!!

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It's my first time writing here

In an amazing English class our handsome teacher (named)*, Mike, recommends "italki" to us. He says it's not only a software to learn, but also a fantastic place to make friends from all over the world.
There are many crazy ideas in my head lately. I am REALLY REALLY NOT good at studying but I have to take an important examination on December 24. OMG that's CHRISTMAS! I LOVE CHRISTMAS! but I can't even enjoy it hehehehe A sad story, isn't it? However, as my friend said, everyone is on the ways to perfect.So I can't stop moving. No pains, no gains.

By the way, I LOVE TAYLOR SWIFT!!!!

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*A more fluid, natural way of saying this is "...our handsome teacher, Mike, recommends..."

Hi Melody! Welcome to italki! This is a really great start! You made very few mistakes. I left the entry in present tense but it's probably better told in past tense. And since this is clearly a super casual post, I left the familiar language in. Don't forget to leave a space after any punctuation marks (like fullstops (.), exclamation marks(!), commas(,) and so on)! I hope to see more posts from you in future. :)

welcome to Italki i hope it helps you to perfect your language skills!

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