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Christmas tree As all of us know Christmas time is coming soon, every country has different traditions and customs, I think putting a Christmas tree is one of the most common. In my house, we haven’t put the Christmas tree since two years for many reasons that I don’t want to mention, these festivities became in something sad to me since many years ago so, I don’t mind to put Christmas decorations in my house. My mother and sister always say that I am like “The Grinch,” that I hate Christmas but, that isn’t true. My mother likes to decorate our house; she makes different kinds of things, better than many things that you can find in the stores. She is 65 years old, and she is getting birthday tomorrow. Because of her age, her mood for some problems, and her birthday; I decided to put our Christmas tree. I spend one hour putting it, setting each piece of it. When she came home, she became so happy, she was surprised. She doesn’t deserve to perceive my bad feelings, feelings that I don’t know why I feel it; anyway, I’m very happy because I could do something to my mom that became happy.

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Christmas tree

As all of us know Christmas time is coming soon, (and) every country has different traditions and customs, I think putting a Christmas tree is one of the most common. In my house, we haven’t put the Christmas tree since (for) two years for many reasons that I don’t want to mention, these festivities became in something sad to me since many years ago so, I don’t mind (wish, want) to put Christmas decorations in my house. My mother and sister always say that I am like “The Grinch,” that I hate Christmas but, that isn’t true.

My mother likes to decorate our house; she makes different kinds of things, better than many things that you can find in the stores. She is 65 years old, and she is getting (celebrating her) birthday tomorrow. Because of her age, her mood (feelings) for some problems, and her birthday; I decided to put our Christmas tree. I spend one hour putting it, setting each piece of it.

When she came home, she became so happy, she was surprised. She doesn’t deserve to perceive (sense) my bad feelings, feelings that I don’t know why I feel it; anyway, I’m very happy because I couldn’t (was able to) do something to (for) my mom that became (made her) happy.

 

Great work Luisa! For the entry and your good deed.

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Christmas tree

As all of us know Christmas time is coming soon, every country has different traditions and customs, I think putting a Christmas tree is one of the most common. In my house, we haven’t put the Christmas tree since  for two years for many reasons that I don’t want to mention, these festivities this festivity became in something sad to me since many years ago so, I don’t mind to put putting Christmas decorations in my house. My mother and sister always say that I am like “The Grinch,” that  because I hate Christmas but that isn’t true.

My mother likes to decorate our house; she makes different kinds of things, better than many things that you can find in the stores. She is 65 years old, and she is getting  will be having/celebrating her birthday tomorrow. Because of her age, her mood for attitude towards some problems, and her birthday; I decided to  put our Christmas tree. I spend one hour putting it, setting each piece of it. (You can also say: "I spend one hour assembling it.")

When she came home, she became was so happy and she was surprised. She doesn’t deserve to perceive  sense my bad feelings, feelings that I don’t know why I feel it; anyway, I’m very happy because I couldn’t  could do something to  for my mom that became  made her happy.
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Christmas tree

As all of us know Christmas time is coming soon, every country has different traditions and customs, I think putting a Christmas tree is one of the most common. In my house, we haven’t put the Christmas tree since two years for many reasons that I don’t want to mention, these festivities became in something sad to me since many years ago so, I don’t mind to put Christmas decorations in my house. My mother and sister always say that I am like “The Grinch,” that I hate Christmas but, that isn’t true.

My mother likes to decorate our house; she makes different kinds of things, better than many things that you can find in the stores. She is 65 years old, and her birthday is tomorrow. Because of her age, her mood for some problems, and her birthday; I decided to put our Christmas tree. I spend one hour putting it, setting each piece of it.

When she came home, she became so happy, she was surprised. She doesn’t deserve to perceive my bad feelings, feelings that I don’t know why I feel it; anyway, I’m very happy because I couldn’t do something to my mom that became happy.
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Happy Holidays to you.
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Im happy for this. happy new year to you :/

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