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if my cellphone is broken? I have heard a story, an old man went to a mobil phone repair station. he asked:" if my phone is broken, why I con't get my son's call?" The shop assistant:" sorry,sair, your phone is well,not broken." Today I want to say:"If my WIFI is no signal? why i con't recived message? I don't need any one who tell me ,I konw my phone has no problem.I always get many cold calls, the courier pickup message, WeChat and QQ group of news which have no relationship with me." I fell lonely ,feel the lack of love. I know you love me .my parents, my sisiter, my friends. But I feel sad, not because there has something make me sad ,but have no things make me feel happy. I miss the snow in the north, in xinong, in xianan, the pure angel. I miss you .

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Is my cellphone is broken?

I heard a story about an old man that went to a mobile phone repair shop. He asked, "If my phone is broken, how is it that I can receive my son's calls?" The shop assistant replied, "Sorry sir, your phone is, well, not broken." (I'm guessing this is the joke?)

Today I wanted to ask someone, "If I have no WiFi signal, can I still receive messages?"* But I didn't need anyone to give me an answer, I know my phone hasn't got any problems with it**. I always receive a lot of cold calls, courier pickup messages, WeChat and QQ group news which have nothing to do with me."
I feel lonely and not very loved even though I know you, my parents, my sister and my friends all love me. I also feel sad, not because there is something that makes me sad, but because there is nothing that makes me feel happy.
I miss the snow in the north, in Xinong, in Xian'an, the pure angel??. I miss you.

*I'm guessing this is what you wanted to say in my broken Chinese-> 如果我没有WiFi signal，我还可以接收消息吗？

**You can also say, '...I know that there's actually nothing wrong with my phone'.

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What if my cellphone is broken?

I heard a story recently. An old man went to a mobile phone repair station. He asked: "If my phone is broken, why cannot I get my son's call?" The shop assistant: "Sorry, sir, your phone works. It is not broken."
Today I want to ask: "If my WIFI has a signal, why cannot I receive messages? I don't need anyone to tell me; I know my phone works. I always get many cold calls, the courier pickup messages, WeChat and QQ group of news which have no relationship with me."
I fell lonely and feel the lack of love. I know you love me; my parents, my sister, my friends. But I feel sad, not because something has made me sad ,but because I have no things to make me feel happy.
I miss the snow in the north, in Xinong, in Xianan, the pure angel. I miss you .

Very well written!

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