Xmas is coming! My notebook♪04
It's day off today.
I had my hair cut :)
The hair salon has got a pretty Christmas tree !
Christmas is coming !
I want to see Christmas illuminations :)
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Xmas is coming! My notebook♪04
It's my day off today.I had my hair cut today.
The hair salon has got a pretty Christmas tree !
Christmas is coming !
I want to see Christmas lights :)
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Xmas is Coming! My Notebook♪04
It's my day off today.I had my hair cut. :)
The hair salon has
Christmas is coming!
I want to see Christmas illuminations. :)
Good job Hina-san. The title should be capitalized. You don't need to put a space after your sentences and the exclamation mark "!". Pretty and beautiful are interchangeable. You could also use gorgeous or lovely. It is the same with lights and illuminations. You can also reword the last the sentence as, "I want to see the illumination of Christmas lights." or "I want to see the bright illuminations of Christmas." If you have any questions you can email me. Study hard!
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