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Can you help me to find grammar errors in my diary. Today, I bought two books in Aladin.(the Online Book store in Korea) One is the Fluent in 3 month written by Benny Lewis. the other is a Mind for Numbers written by Barbara Oakley. but I felt a little sad. because i was able to buy the used book Fluent in 3 months 3 hours ago. But it was sold. I was able to save the book price 60% of money. After regular class, my home teacher said us "You'll be able to go home. the other words, you should not stay in dormitory. But students who has no job, can't " I was firstly happy. Today. but last word made me low. Because I have no job. ( My high school is likely to Meister School in Germany. because my high school based on Germany meister school. But the school pressed students. Don't use smartphone and laptop in dormitory. it's like army )

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Can you help me to find grammar errors in my diary.

Today, I bought two books in Aladin (an Online Book store in Korea). One was the "Fluent in 3 months" book written by Benny Lewis. The other was "A Mind for Numbers" written by Barbara Oakley. However I felt a little sad because I would have been able to buy a used copy of "Fluent in 3 months" 3 hours ago but it got sold out. I would have saved 60% of the money I used to buy the new copy. 

After regular class, my home teacher said to us (or told us), "You'll be able to go home. In other words, you should not stay in dormitory. But students who have no job can't." I was happy at first, today, but his last words made me low (sad) because I have no job. (My high school is comparable to a Meister School in Germany because my high school is based on a Germany meister school. But the school presses students not to use smartphones or laptops in the dormitory. It's like the army!)

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