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My attitude towards new technology! I read a paper last night which wrote about the today’s society is full.I am not sure if it can express the main idea of people’s attitude but it’s a really good point.there are more and more new technologies in our daily life.we can leave our wallet,ID card or other important things like these but we never forget the smartphone.It’s weird and a little sick!And many individuals have mental illnesses who always have a negative attitude to society.We should have felt satisfying in such a convinent and fast society,right? So I guess it’s related tightly to the new technology!You know,when another technology appears in society which means that there are some groups of people to learn and grasp it.If the technology is more and more difficult for and the work from it is also hard to competent for us which may force us to learn it to master it and it’s a little bit reluctant and tame process which is a high possibility that make people feel stressful!It’s a The butterfly effect. And we agree that we do have too much technology because we have many jobs,we have much money,we can live better and all of these start from new technology!However, we are losing much significant things such as wellness and happiness.It’s an equation!

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My attitude towards new technology!

I read a paper last night which said that modern society is full. I am not sure if this can express the main idea of people’s attitudes but it’s a really good point. There is more and newer technology in our daily life. We can leave behind our wallet, ID card or other important things like these but we never forget the smartphone. It’s weird and a little sick! And many individuals have an antisocial mental illness. We should be satisfied with such a convenient and fast society, right? So I guess it’s intimately connected to the new technology! You know, when another technology appears in society which means that there are some groups of people to learn and grasp it. If technology is more and more difficult for us and we find it harder to compete with then we may be forced, rather reluctantly, to master it. We are then very likely to become stressed! It’s the butterfly effect. And we agree that we do have too much technology because we have many jobs, we have much money, we can live better and all of these start from new technology! However, we are losing many significant things such as health and happiness. It’s an equation!

Very well written!

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