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A cold weather In the morning,when I skimed the moment in Wechat, I found many friends had posted the pictures of snow. the north world had become a white kingdom. When I was young, I usually made snowman with my brother. he is very smart, and our snowman were always the most beautiful among other children of our neighbours. However, everything is different now. I stayed in the south of China lonely, he stayed in the north, we cannot made snowman any more. It's getting colder and colder, from tonight, my city changes to the Raining model. I hate raining, the lasting raining. there will be no sunshine, and the days are gloomy, wet. what's worse is that clothes keep wet all the time which feel uncomfortable.

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A The cold weather

In the morning, when I skimed spent/passed the a moment in Wechat, I found many friends had posted the pictures of snow. The northern world had become a white kingdom. When I was young, I usually made a snowman with my brother. He is very smart, and our snowman were was always the most beautiful among those of the (other) children of our neighbours. However, everything is different now. I [stayed]/live in the south of China on my own lonely, he stayed in the north, and we cannot make a snowman any more.
It's getting colder (and colder,) and from tonight, my city changes to the raining model. I hate raining, the [lasting]/continual raining. There will be no sunshine, and the days are gloomy, wet. What's worse is that clothes [keep]/stay/remain wet all the time, which feels uncomfortable.

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