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Is use of "Although" in the following sentences correct grammatically and conceptually? If it is not , kindly suggest ways to make it clearer.
The secondary flow loss is due to the interaction between vortices (tip leakage and horseshoe vortices) and boundary layer of suction, casing and hub surfaces in the Wells turbine. These interactions decrease turbine performance. Although the secondary flows are a major reason for the aerodynamic losses which are responsible for 35%-40% of the total losses in the turbine passage. Thus these results will require consideration from the turbine designers.
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The secondary flow loss is due to the interaction between vortices (tip leakage and horseshoe vortices) and the boundary layer of suction, the casing and hub surfaces in the Wells turbine. These interactions decrease turbine performance. Although The secondary flows are a major reason for the aerodynamic losses which are responsible for 35%-40% of the total losses in the turbine passage. Thus these results will require consideration by from the turbine designers.
When you start a statement with 'although', it should be preceded or followed by another statement ; 'although' means that the other statement still holds true, despite [even with] the condition described in the 'although' [statement] :
'I am able to make sense of your analysis, although/even though I don't know anything about turbines'.
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My meaning is the thing like "on the other hand". I don't want "conjunction". I want sentence of " the secondary flows are a major reason for the aerodynamic losses which are responsible for 35%-40% of the total losses in the turbine passage. Thus these results will require consideration from the turbine designers." be an independent sentence and addition information.
"On the other hand" is OK?
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Perfect: no corrections.
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