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Try to start again I haven't written a notebook for a while but I'll try again and I hope that I can keep this at least a month. Recently, I've been rude so I wake up around 10 a.m.. I should change the rhythm to improve my English but it is more difficult for me to study other language by myself than I thought, even though I go abroad. When I woke up I was in the little sofa. It meant I fell asleep in the sofa while I was watching movie last night. It made me so tired because it was a little sofa for one person so I've got stiff neck. I felt bad from the beginning of the day. Actually, I woke up sometimes but I just didn't want to move another inch. Anyway, I got up and ate a bowl of yogurt and half of a kiwi fruit as breakfast and watched the movie from the beginning again, since the story didn't come into my mind directly last night because I almost slept during watching it. It was nice story. The main character has remembering problem it means he loose every memory of one day after he sleeps but he has memory of the life before the problem happened.(This explanation is so bad. Do you understand the basic story?) However he fell in love even though he forgets the face of the girl who he loves. I imagined I were him. it's so sad but I really like this movie. After the movie, I still had enough time to go work so I watched another movie. It was not so bad but worse than before one. After watching movie, I made resume for new job. I want to try to work at restaurant or cafe which there aren't any Japanese. It would be great to lean English. It was totally different how to write resume with Japanese one. So it was a little bit difficult to make it by myself but my roommate Patrick helped me so much! Thanks Paddy. I could finish it before I went to work. About work, it was not so quiet but longer than usual. After finishing work I drank some glasses of red wine.

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Trying to start again

I haven't written a notebook entry for a while but I'll try again and I hope that I can keep this going for at least a month.
Recently, I've been rude* so I wake up around 10 a.m.. I should change the rhythm and use the time to improve my English but it is more difficult for me to study another language by myself than I thought, even though I've gone  go abroad.

When I woke up I was in on the little sofa. It This meant I fell had fallen asleep in on the sofa while I was watching a movie last night. It made me so tired because it was a little sofa for one person so I've got a stiff neck. I felt bad from the beginning of the day. Actually, I woke up a couple of sometimes but I just didn't want to move another inch. Anyway, I got up and ate a bowl of yogurt and half of a kiwi fruit as breakfast and watched the movie from the beginning again, since the story didn't come into my mind directly last night because I almost slept during was falling asleep while watching it. It was nice story. The main character has a memory remembering problem it means he loose every memory of one day after he sleeps but he has memory of the life before the problem happened.**(This explanation is so bad. Do you understand the basic story?) However he fell in love even though he forgets the face of the girl who he loves. I imagined I were him. it's so sad but I really like this movie. After the movie, I still had enough time to go work so I watched another movie. It was not so bad but worse than before the previous one.
After watching the movie, I made wrote a resume for a new job. I want to try to work at a restaurant or cafe which where there aren't any Japanese. It would be great to learn English. It was totally different how to write resume with Japanese one from writing a resume in Japanese. So it was a little bit difficult to make it by myself but my roommate Patrick helped me so much! Thanks Paddy. I could was able to finish it before I went to work.

About work, it was not so quiet but longer than usual. After finishing work I drank some a couple glasses of red wine.

みずきさん!!!お久しぶりですよ。It's so good to see you back! (Before I saw that you had written a Notebook, I was cooking Mirin, and I thought about you!).

I can see that your English has improved. A few corrections and notes:

* "I've been rude" - I'm not sure what you mean by this. Are you saying, "I've been a slacker" (i.e. lazy) or that you feel you were being rude by not posting on italki?

** You're right. Your explanation is bad. But I can tell you're talking about "50 First Dates." I love that movie. I think you want to say, "The main character has a memory problem: each time he wakes up he loses his every memory of his life before."

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