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Universal Studio Japan I went to U.S.J. (Universal Studio Japan) with my five friends last Sunday. It was very popular theme park because it has many of attractive rides such as a ride of Harry Potter. It was the third time for me to visit there but I had a great time as always. It was so crowded that a wating time of Harry Potter's attraction was so long, three hours. We did not of course ride it. Instead, we enjoyed a water ride of Jurassic Park. It was very exciting. We literally got wet in the last water splash but did not care. In the evening, so beautiful and amazing show was held. Some casts were dancing to nice music. A lot of angels appeared from the top of a tall building with beautifully decorated lights while they were dancing. There were so many people and we had to watch it far from the show. But we enjoyed this exciting atomosphere.

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Universal Studio Japan

I visited U.S.J. (Universal Studio Japan) with five friends last Sunday. It is a very popular theme park and has many attractions,  such as the Harry Potter ride. It was my third visit and I had a great time as always. It was so crowded that the waiting time for the Harry Potter attraction was three hours. We did not ride it. Instead, we enjoyed the Jurassic Park water ride. It was very exciting. We got wet but we did not care. In the evening we saw a beautiful and amazing show. The cast danced to music. Dancing angels appeared from the top of a tall building with beautifully decorated lights. The audience  was so large we had to watch the show  from a distance. The atmosphere was one of excitement.
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I LOVE USJ!!! (*^^*)
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Hello Ehito, 'The atmosphere was one of excitement' is just another way of saying 'The atmosphere was an excited one.' One refers to atmosphere in this case. Other examples: The attitude of the man was one of anger. The mood at the party was one of misery. You can use 'One of joy' in the sentence.

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