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My name is Monique , I'm 21 old years and i'm from Brazil. It's my first text in english, for me to write and to speak are hard but i can read. My studies started in the school how i was 11old years , with lots of grammair and any conversation. Today it's the language mondial and everybody need to learn, i'm going to practice.
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Remember to keep your sentences short; yours are too long (re: comma splice).
"My name is Monique. I'm 21 years old and I'm from Brazil."
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good job, go ahead
saludos, Manuel
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Hi everybody 1#60
My name is Monique , I'm 21 old years and i'm from Brazil. It's my first text in english, for me to write and to speak are hard but i can read. My studies started in the school how when i was 11old years , with lots of grammair and any some conversation. Today it's the world language mondial and everybody needs to learn it, so i'm going to practice.A good start. Your school did a good job. Remember its always "I..." and never "i...". Good luck!
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