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parts of cover letter I’m writing to express my interest about an internship within your company. As part of my studies, I am looking for a 2 months -training period this summer outside of France. From your website I feel that your company places prominence in promoting and safeguarding knowledges about medicinal plants and their utility. That’s why I would welcome the opportunity to contribute to your company as I’m so interested in working and learning in the area of medicinal plants. I am currently a first-year student at Agrocampus Ouest which is a French engineering school of landscape and plants sciences. In the course of my studies I get a lot of information about botany, geology, biology… and this internship represents a perfect setting to both put into practice the theoretical knowledge and discover the running of a company. You can count on my dynamism and motivation hardworking, careful and willing; I will give the best of myself during these 2 months. Please find enclosed my CV along this email; I am available to answer any of your questions and to discuss this opportunity further. I learned of you through the website of the Irish Specialist Nursery Association. From your website it appears that you work as a medicinal herbs ‘nursery and moreover you create and restore gardens. It drew my attention since I have the feeling that it would be very enthralling to discover these two aspects and the ties between these sectors. In addition I would welcome the inspiring opportunity to contribute to your company as I’m so interested in working and learning in the area of medicinal and aromatic plants. From your website it appears that you work as a specialist nursery, you have landscaping activities moreover you take part in garden show and events. It drew my attention since I have the feeling that it would be very enthralling to discover all these aspects and the ties between the 3 sectors. In addition I would welcome the inspiring opportunity to contribute to your company as I enjoy what I learned from your working approach.

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parts of cover letter

I’m writing to express my interest about an internship within your company.
As part of my studies, I am looking for a 2 months -training period this summer outside of France.

I gather from your website I feel that your company places prominence in promoting and safeguarding knowledges about medicinal plants and their utilities. That’s why I would welcome the opportunity to contribute to your company as I’m so interested in working and learning in the area of medicinal plants interests me.

I am currently a first-year student at Agrocampus Ouest which is a French engineering school of landscape and plants sciences. In the course of my studies I get a lot of information about botany, geology, biology… and this internship represents a perfect setting to both put into practice the theoretical knowledge and discover the running of a company.
You can count on my dynamism and motivation. I am hardworking, careful and willing; I will give the best of myself during these 2 months.

Please find enclosed my CV along this email; I am available to answer any of your questions and to discuss this opportunity further.

I learned of discovered your company through the website of the Irish Specialist Nursery Association.

From your website it appears that you work as a medicinal herbs ‘nursery and moreover you create and restore gardens. It drew my attention since I have the feeling that it would be very enthralling to discover these two aspects and the ties between these sectors. In addition I would welcome the inspiring opportunity to contribute to your company as I’m so interested in working and learning in the area of medicinal and aromatic plants.

From your website it appears that you work as a specialist nursery, you have landscaping activities moreover you take part in garden show and events. It drew my attention since I have the feeling that it would be very enthralling to discover all these aspects and the ties between the 3 sectors. In addition I would welcome the inspiring opportunity to contribute to your company as I enjoy what I learned from your working approach.


The final two paragraphs are both similar to the second. It might be an idea to condense the three paragraphs so as not to repeat yourself. Other than that, excellent use of English.

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