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Dear Tom,
I am so glad you can come to my house but it is pity to say that, we are going holiday. So you have to live yourself.
There are two floors in the house, you can live in the master bedroom, the things are all set, besides we are not prepare the ingredients for you in kitchen, so you may need to buy something yourself. I am here give you some suggestion you may have a try.
1, There is a big jewel above the table, please be careful with that.
2, Please lock the door if you come out, it is not flexible to use it, so just be patient.
3, Please help me to water the plants three times a week.
4, Pay attention to curtains and decorates.
In addition, I would like to introduce our neighbourhood around us, near the subway, it is a huge supermarket, if you want to buy some necessities, you can go ahead to it. Also the place you can’t miss is our square, it just finished, so everything is new, the delicate decorates and cascade flow from hill is wonderful. Oh, I am recommend our delicious local food, you can find everything in it. So just enjoy yourself.
I feel pleasant you can come to our house, hope you can have wonderful month, have a nice day!
Sincerely
Casper
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A letter
Dear Tom,I am so glad you can come to my house, though it is a pity to say that we are going on holiday. So you'll have to stay by yourself.
There are two floors in the house, you can stay in the master bedroom. Everything is all set, however, we have not provided food in the kitchen, so you may need to buy some for yourself.
Also some things I would like to note if you could take awareness of:.
1, There is a big jewel above the table, please be careful with that.
2, Please lock the door when you leave the house. The lock is a bit stiff, so just be patient and it will work.
3, Please help me to water the plants three times a week.
4, Pay attention to curtains and decorations.
In addition, I would like to introduce you to our neighbourhood around us. Near the subway there is a huge supermarket, if you want to buy some necessities, you can go ahead and do it there. Also the place you can’t miss is our square, they have just finished it, so everything is new, the delicate decorates and cascading flow from hill is wonderful. Oh, I am to also recommend our delicious local food, you can find everything around.. So just enjoy yourself.
I feel pleased you can come to our house, I hope you can have a wonderful month, have a nice day!
Sincerely
Casper
1, There is a big jewel above the table, please be careful with that.
2, Please lock the door when you leave the house. The lock is a bit stiff, so just be patient and it will work.
3, Please help me to water the plants three times a week.
4, Pay attention to curtains and decorations.
In addition, I would like to introduce you to our neighbourhood around us. Near the subway there is a huge supermarket, if you want to buy some necessities, you can go ahead and do it there. Also the place you can’t miss is our square, they have just finished it, so everything is new, the delicate decorates and cascading flow from hill is wonderful. Oh, I am to also recommend our delicious local food, you can find everything around.. So just enjoy yourself.
I feel pleased you can come to our house, I hope you can have a wonderful month, have a nice day!
Sincerely
Casper
(Note from editor: Sorry, I just went through and edited without highlighting or underlining any corrections for you to see better, I hope this isn't a problem.)
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