Check the letter in informal style, please
Hi Tom!
How are you? I'm glad that your exams completed. How did you write them? I think that you have received not very good grades, because you spenT a little time to learning.
I'd love to go camping with you this summer. Every day I sit at home, so it'd be great if you take me with you. Tell me where and when you are going. This summer I'm going to go to my grandmother, so I need to know exactly when we go camping.
I have never went camping, but I can ask my parents to buy me all the necessary stuff.
And how many people will go camping? Can I invite my friend Bob with us? Email me soon!
Lots of love,
Paula
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Check the letter in informal style, please
Hi Tom!How are you? I'm glad that your exams are over. How did you do?
You didn't study much, so I think don't think your grades will be very good.
I'd love to go camping with you this summer. Every day I sit at home, so it'd be great if we could go together. Let me know where and when you plan on going. This summer I'm going to my grandmother's, so I need to know when you plan on going camping.
I've never been camping before, but I can ask my parents to buy me anything I'll need.
Also how many people will be going? Would it be okay if I invite my friend Bob?
Talk to you soon!
Lots of love,
Paula
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