E-mail to my friend Good evening everyone: my teacher, who is not a native English speaker, asked me to write an e-mail to a non-existent friend whose unhealthy lifestyle could cause her some trouble. I know it's not a great e-mail, but I'm kind of disconcerted because of the grade I got... could you help me correct my e-mail, please? does it have grammatical mistakes? Thank you! ---- Hi: I have to say I’m quite worried about the way you look. I mean, you look so thin and pale that I’m even beginning to think you‘re sick. It won’t take too long before you actually start feeling sick, and I’m sure it is all due to your unhealthy lifestyle. I know you just love to eat, but you should learn to eat healthy. You should eat more fruits and vegetables and less salt and sugar. Also, I don’t think it’s a good idea to spend all day sitting in front of a computer... that will just kill you! You should do more exercise... not that you have to go to the gym or something like that... walking will do. I hope you will take my advices into account. Love. Seb.