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Three small writting tasks(not related), please kindly correct them. Introduction for Computational Science: With information as its background, Information & Computing Science is a combination of both mathematics and information management interdisciplinary subject. It develops the students with good knowledge of mathematics, basic theories and methods of information as well as computing science, trains for early stage of scientific research. Something about Spanish: Spanish is the second widest used language in the world. Nearly 475 million people are speaking this language, it is one of the six official languages of the UN. <Modern Spanish> is suitable for beginners. The layout of this book is very systematic, and it demonstrates some learning methods so that people can learn this beautiful language in a native way. During the process, I have learnt the pronunciations, vocabulary and grammars, also I have known some cultures in Spanish speaking countries, now I am able to reply emails and communicate in Spanish. Order Management & Medical Resources Integration Programme: Description : The purpose of this project is to manage all related information, including: basic datas of customers,service time, type and expense, the invovlved staff and medical service providers,etc. Responsibility : I am the leader as well as an efficient participant in this project. It enables us to provide the best offers to customers under different evacuation plans,optimizes the entire process, makes the follow ups easier, improves the efficiency and accuracy of daily work.

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Three small writting tasks(not related), please kindly correct them.

Introduction for Computational (Computer or Computing yes... but Computational is something else...) Science:

With information as its background, (<- I don't know what that means, but it's unnecessary to say) Information & Computing Science is an  interdisciplinary subject, combination of both mathematics and information management interdisciplinary subject.
It develops provides the students with good knowledge of mathematics, basic theories and methods of information as well as computing science, and trains for early stage of scientific research.

Something about Spanish:

Spanish is the second widest used language in the world. Nearly 475 million people are speaking speak this language, it is one of the six official languages of the UN.
It is suitable for beginners. The layout of this book is very systematic, and it demonstrates some learning methods so that people can learn this beautiful language in a native way (better: like a native).
During the process of reading, I have learnt the pronunciations, vocabulary and grammars, also I have also known some cultures in Spanish speaking countries, and now I am able to reply to emails and communicate in Spanish.

Order Management & Medical Resources Integration Programme:

Description :
The purpose of this project is to manage all related information, including: basic datas of customers,service time, type and expense, the invovlved staff involved and medical service providers,etc.

Responsibility :
I am the leader as well as an efficient participant in this project.
It enables us to provide the best offers to customers under different evacuation plans,optimizes the entire process, makes the follow ups easier, and improves the efficiency and accuracy of daily work.
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Three small writting tasks(not related), please kindly correct them.

Introduction for Computational Science:

With information as its base, Information & Computing Science combines mathematics and information management into an interdisciplinary subject.
It teaches rigorous mathematics, basic theories and methods of information as well as computing science, preparing for the early stage of scientific research.

Something about Spanish:

Spanish is the second widest used language in the world. Nearly 475 million people speak it; one of the six official languages of the UN.
It is suitable for beginners. The layout of this book is very systematic, and shows some native ways to learn this beautiful language.
Reading this book, I have learnt pronunciation, and some vocabulary and grammar. Also, I have come to know about several cultures in Hispanic countries and am now able to reply to emails and communicate in Spanish.

Order Management & Medical Resources Integration Programme:

Description :
The purpose of this project is to manage all related information, including: basic customer data*, service times, type and expense, relevant staff and medical service providers, etc.

Responsibility :
I am the leader as well as an efficient participant in this project.
It enables us to provide the best offers to customers under different evacuation plans**, optimizes the entire process, makes the follow ups easier, improves the efficiency and accuracy of daily work.

*data (singular) = data (plural)

**one would use 'evacuation' for an emergency only - fire - flood etc. If the customer left the company in the normal course of business, he would 'leave' or 'desubscribe' or 'unsubscribe' but not 'evacuate'.

Very well written!

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Hi, Jaime, thanks for your comment, these 3 paragraphs are just translations from Chinese to English, probably it's different from what you mentioned here. I want friends here to correct them for me. Good day to U!
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Hi Derek, I have studies in information sciences, and in my oppinion, despite information science and computer science are related are not the same as you mentioned. The first one concerns with the way of store, retrieve and analize information while the second with the architecture of computers and its programming. For example, but while information science makes research in decisions support system (DSS), computer science makes research in new architectures of data warehouses (DW). Hola Derek, tengo estudios superiores en ciencias de la información y en mi opinión, aunque las ciencias de la informacion y las ciencias de la computación están relacionadas no son lo mismo como lo mencionaste. La primera trata sobre las formas de almacenar, recuperar y analizar informacion, mientras que la segunda trata sobre la arquitectura de los computadores y su programación. Por ejemplo: mientras que las ciencias de la información hacen investigaciones en sistemas para la toma de las decisiones (DSS), las ciencias de la computación lo hacen en nuevas arquitecturas de bodegas de datos (DW).

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