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IELTS Writing Part 2 Advantages/disadvantages
It is widely debated whether computer gaming is beneficial or has a negative impact on children. This essay advocates the point that virtual games are helpful for children and have a positive impact in long run. It will discuss the upside of this phenomenon such as gaining skills for adult life, as well as the downside like the possible impairment of socialization and isolation from peers.
Computer games may be really advantageous because they develop invaluable abilities for obtaining/achieving success in life whereas such skills are difficult to gain engaging other activities. There are a diverse range of games in the market and each of them train a certain set of aptitudes - from planning a business in strategy games to realizing that it is essential for success to develop yourself - for example in RPG (Role Play Games). A recent poll showed that more than half the founders of burgeoning startups attribute their prosperity to playing video games in childhood.
On the other hand, it is believed that teenagers may not develop their social skills properly due to playing too much. Indeed, when some children spend all their time in front of a PC, while their peers spend time socializing, gamers may feel being isolated from society and lonely. Moreover this gap might increase in the future thereby impairing productivity in adulthood. In sociological research carried out in the United States, showed that more than 15 per cent of teenagers who communicated with peers comparatively little reported that this impeded their ability to build a network of acquaintances when they grew up.
Overall, the children who spend a moderate amount of time playing video games get an important benefit - relaxation. The curriculum in middle and high school is more intensive than it was 20 years ago, and the teenagers need to unwind after classes; video gaming is one method of doing it.
In conclusion, computer games have advantages like being a way to relax and developing effective life strategies, and disadvantages such as impairing communicative skills. It is recommended/With this in mind, perhaps the best advice is to play video games in moderation in order to ensure comprehensive development of an adolescent.
Great piece of writing Mike.
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