Search from various English teachers...
China flagvincent
something about interview This morning,i took the third time interview in Maersk Line at 9:00.a.m. As usual,I worried about being late for this important interview,so i waked up early to catch the bus,believe it or not, i waited about 20 minutes until the first bus came. actually,that really drive me crazy.I hate waiting. And,what worse,when i caught the bus,I was pushed into a teeny tiny place like packed sardines,and i almost could not feel my legs after 1 hour's drive,i still feel pain in my neck now.During the 1 hour's drive,i even wanted to jump out of the car and walked along the tops of all the other vehicles.That's so stupid.In reailty,that could never happened.If I'm in a Taxi, I will worry about the taxi fare.oh~no~what the hell in the universal.Just for joking,never mind. During the interview,I’m tried to be well-communicative and confident,and I answered all the questions the interviewer raised,it looked like everything goes in the right way. Now I need to wait for the result.God bless me.

Corrections · 2

0

something about interview

This morning,i took the third time I had a 3rd interview in Maersk Line at 9:00.a.m.
As usual, I worried about being late for this important interview, so i waked I woke up early to catch the bus, believe it or not, i I waited about 20 minutes until the first bus came. actually, that really drive drove me crazy. I hate waiting.
And, what's worse,

What's worse
when i I caught the bus, I was pushed into a teeny tiny place like packed in like sardines, and i I almost could not feel my legs after the 1 hour's drive, i I still feel pain in my neck now. During the 1 hour's drive, i I even wanted to jump out of the car bus and walked along the tops of all the other vehicles. That's so stupid. In reailty, that could never happened. If I'm in a Taxi, I will worry about the taxi fare. oh~no~what the hell,  in the universal. Just for I'm just joking, never mind.

During the interview, I’m tried to be well-communicative and confident, and I answered all the questions the interviewer raised, it looked like everything goes in the right way. It looks like everything went o.k.
Now I need to wait for the result. God bless me.

Good try! 

First I want to say, I had to put a space after nearly every full stop and comma. Please remember to use a space after all commas and full stops!

Also please try to remember that the pronoun I is always a capital letter!

Lastly, There are some problems with the way you are forming past tense  that maybe you can look at, but I know tense is just about the hardest part of English, especially for a speaker of a language like Chinese, where there is no changing verbs with tense etc.

On the whole a really well written article, 祝你好运,加油!

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today