something about interview
This morning,i took the third time interview in Maersk Line at 9:00.a.m.
As usual,I worried about being late for this important interview,so i waked up early to catch the bus,believe it or not, i waited about 20 minutes until the first bus came. actually,that really drive me crazy.I hate waiting.
And,what worse,when i caught the bus,I was pushed into a teeny tiny place like packed sardines,and i almost could not feel my legs after 1 hour's drive,i still feel pain in my neck now.During the 1 hour's drive,i even wanted to jump out of the car and walked along the tops of all the other vehicles.That's so stupid.In reailty,that could never happened.If I'm in a Taxi, I will worry about the taxi fare.oh~no~what the hell in the universal.Just for joking,never mind.
During the interview,I’m tried to be well-communicative and confident,and I answered all the questions the interviewer raised,it looked like everything goes in the right way.
Now I need to wait for the result.God bless me.
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something about interview
This morning,As usual, I worried about being late for this important interview, so i
What's worse when
During the interview, I
Now I need to wait for the result. God bless me.
Good try!
First I want to say, I had to put a space after nearly every full stop and comma. Please remember to use a space after all commas and full stops!
Also please try to remember that the pronoun I is always a capital letter!
Lastly, There are some problems with the way you are forming past tense that maybe you can look at, but I know tense is just about the hardest part of English, especially for a speaker of a language like Chinese, where there is no changing verbs with tense etc.
On the whole a really well written article, 祝你好运,加油!
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