My daily life 2016.11.19
I went to the library today and read many funny books .The weather was very sunny and hot .So i didn't want to go out.But at noon my classmate invited me to eat snacks.So i had to go out.On the road ,i saw many students stayed at the playgroud.Oh,there were a football game .It is amazing!
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My daily life 2016.11.19
I went to the library today and read many funny books .The weather was very sunny and hot so I didn't want to go out. At noon my classmate invited me to eat snacks so I had to go out. On the road I saw many students staying in their playgrounds. Oh, there were a football game .It is amazing!Please be careful with your connectors; ... but, between, so, ... If you are not sure how to use them, do not write them and begin new sentences. For example;
It was raining so we got wet. Sally had no money so she missed the bus and walked. It rained very heavily but we had umbrellas. Sally had no money but she did not care.
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