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Diary of my life in Canada Noember 18 I've made many mistakes at work so far. Finally, I feel I've gotten used to work at a cafe. I usually work from afternoon to closing. Then, after 4 pm, I work by myself. It was not busy afternoon during summer and fall, but it's getting busy because it's so cold outside, so many people come our cafe even after 6 pm. I have many things I have to do for following morning. So I have to prepare lots of things and I serve customers at the same time by myself. It's actually hard for me. My boss told me I have to prepare for tomorrow morning because a stuff open the store by themselves. I understand that, but I wanted to say they also have to prepare for afternoon because I'm also working by myself!!! I know, during morning or lunch time are very busy, but I want them to prepare for me just a little! Whenever they have time, they are chatting..... Working style is totally different between Canada and Japan, so I'm wondering if I should say that I want them to help for me. They might not notice that unless I tell them. Whenever I have problems with work, I feel it's difficult to communicate with them because of my English. Just talking our life or chatting is fine, but it's hard to me to tell them I need a help. I usually work overtime, like half an hour or an hour. But it's a big chance to improve myself. I also have to work efficiently. I'll do my best, and I hope I can finish the work on time tomorrow!!!

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Diary of my life in Canada November 18

I've made many mistakes at work, but I feel that I have gotten adjusted to working at a cafe.
Finally, I feel I've gotten used to work at a cafe.

I usually work from afternoon to closing. Then, after 4 pm, I work by myself( I am confused with  this  last sentence. (You wrote a specific time so that means after a certain time period you are working alone. As an English speaker, I would ask what day(s) do you work alone? So I would write this):  I work in the afternoon to closing time at 6 pm. 
It was not busy afternoon during summer and fall, but it's getting busy because it's so cold outside, so many people come our cafe even after 6 pm. During the summer and fall, we did not have a lot of customers because of the weather. Now, the cafe is very busy because it is so cold outside. And because cafe is open/ does not close until 6 pm.
I have many things that I have to do for  the following morning.
So I have to prepare lots of things, and serve customers at the same time, by myself which is difficult .
It's actually hard for me. My boss told me I have to prepare for tomorrow morning because another employee opens the store by themselves.
I wanted to tell my boss that I understand that opening a store is difficult, but I also have to prepare for the afternoon because I am working by myself!!!. understand that, but I wanted to say they also have to prepare for afternoon because I'm also working by myself!!!
 Additionally, that the cafe is very busy ,in the morning and at lunch time, and I just want to be prepared in advance.during morning or lunch time are very busy, but I want them to prepare for me just a little!
Whenever my co-workers they have time, they are chatting.....
 The working style is totally different between Canada and Japan, so I'm wondering if I should say that I want  need them to help for me. They might not notice that unless I tell them.
Whenever I have problems with work, I feel it's difficult to communicate with them because of my English.
Just talking our life or chatting is fine, but it's hard to me to tell them, that I need a help( or a helping hand).

I Usually, I work overtime, from 30 minutes to an hour. like half an hour or an hour.
But it's a big chance to improve myself.
I also have to work efficiently. I'll do my best, and I hope I can finish the work on time tomorrow!!!

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Diary of my life in Canada November 18

I've made many mistakes at work so far.
Finally, I feel I've gotten used to working in at a cafe.

I usually work from afternoon to closing. Then, After 4 pm, I work by myself.
It was not busy afternoon Afternoons weren´t busy during the summer and fall, but now it's getting busy because it's so cold outside, so many people come to our cafe even after 6 pm.
I have many things I have to do prepare for the following morning.
So I have to prepare lots of things and I serve customers at the same time by myself.
It's actually hard difficult for me. My boss told me I have to prepare for tomorrow morning because a stuff open the store by themselves. Do you mean, because one person has to open the store by themselves
I understand that, but I wanted to say they also have to prepare for the afternoon because I'm also working by myself!!!
I know, during mornings and lunch times are very busy, but I want them to prepare for me just a little!
Whenever they have free time, they are always chatting.....
Working style is totally different between Canada and Japan, so I'm wondering if I should say that I want them to help for me ask them to help me. They might not notice that know unless I tell them.
Whenever I have problems with work, I feel it's difficult to communicate with them because of my English.
Just talking our about life or chatting is fine, but it's hard to me to tell them I need a help.

I usually work overtime, like half an hour or an hour.
But it's a big good chance to improve myself.
I also have to work efficiently. I'll do my best, and I hope I can finish the work on time tomorrow!!!


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