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Daily writing practice 17th, November
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While some people may believe that air pollution is almost mostly made by trash*, it is far more realistic for us is likely / probable that cars cause primarily cause air pollution. Indeed**, there are two important reasons which why cars are responsible for producing harmful emissions, and for depletion depleting / the depletion of natural resources.
The first reason why autos are mostly responsible for air pollution is that they give off a number of badly effect gases, and any of this gas some of which can pose people harmful impacts cause people harm. For example, cars produce carbon monoxide, is a an odorless and colorless gas which can kill a person (when left to build up) in a room. Indeed, According to new research, it suggests new research suggests that a person who lives in big city is chiefly affected by carbon monoxide***. It Research has also found that it carbon monoxide contributes to cause people cancer by higher rates higher rates of cancer in humans, and that also can it can also make you^ more likely to suffer from insomnia or depression. Moreover, carbon dioxide are also released by cars^^ We know that carbon monoxide is mainly responsible for much of the air pollution that is changing the earth’s climate.
(Is there a second reason why cars are responsible for causing air pollution? There appears to be only one reason given here.)
Thus, although cars have been a useful invention, their benefits are outweighed by harmful emissions.
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