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I am tired so much that i can not think about something.Yes,i must do a decision ......
When i was a child,i always wanna to be a scientist.Now,this dream is just beside my finger......
But,i am so tired.I am not sure that if i can hold on or not.Actually,my mom wants me to get it.She always think it is a great job(i just need to sit on the couch and do some easy experiments)......
No,no at all.I keep on thinking and thinking......I have my anwser:no, i don't like to be a scientist.I just wanna my mom be happy.
My mom is so stubborn that i'm not sure if we can have a friendly talk.But,it's ok.I know we should make it solved.I love you, mom.I want you can understand me.
......I am so glad that i can write it here.A place i can say something .....
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Hi,
Well done on writing the below. I hope the corrections I have made are helpful! All the best in making your decision and standing up for what you want : )
Becky
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I am so tired so much that i cannot think about something.Yes,i must do make a decision ......When i was a child i always wanna wanted to be a scientist.Now,this dream is just beside my finger very near......
But,i am so tired.I am not sure that if i can hold on to it or not.Actually,my mom wants me to get it.She always think says it is a great job(i just need to sit on the couch and do some easy experiments)......
No,not at all.I keep on thinking and thinking......I have my anwser:no, i don't like want to be a scientist.I just wanna wanted my mom to be happy.
My mom is so stubborn that i'm not sure if we can have a friendly talk.But,it's ok.I know we should make it solved.I love you, mom.I want you can to understand me.
......I am so glad that i can write it here.A place i can say something .....
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