CORRECTION WITH NOTES

I will be telling you about travel :D !!

NOTE: delete the sentence "I will be telling you about travel :D !!" because "Today, I'm going to write a post about travel" is very similar.

Actually, this is the theme of the question is for my OPIC test. question.

OPIC is an English speaking test. I will take the test it at the end of November.

English test scores is are important in Korea. This is so sad :(

NOTE: use "is" if the noun is singular and "are" if it is plural

Link that will help you: http://ask.dailygrammar.com/Is-vs-Are.html

So ! Today, I will tell you what where I went for travel and my experiences in a new place.

I went to the Canada 8 months ago and lived there for 6 months.

This trip was experience is very special to me because It it made me to learning learn and use English all by myself.

One experience was when I arrived at the airport, I`m feeling furstrated. thirsty.

Because that time, i was really wanted for drink some coffee. I really wanted to drink some coffee, so I found a cafe.

So I found cafe, I ordered "Can i have a ice americano?" 

But they didn`t understand what i said. They said to me "sorry?" When I asked for an iced americano, they didn't understand what I said.

I tryed tried a couple more times, but they still couldn't understand me. then I was so frustrated that I just bought bottled water instead.

CORRECTION ONLY

Today, I will tell you where I went for travel and my experiences in a new place. I went to Canada 8 months ago and lived there for 6 months. This trip was very special to me because it made me learn and use English all by myself. One experience was when I arrived at the airport feeling thirsty. I wanted to drink some coffee, so I found a café. When I asked for an iced americano, they didn’t understand what I said. I tried a couple more times, but they still couldn’t understand me. I was so frustrated that I just bought bottled water instead. I think they couldn’t understand me because of my pronunciation. After one month, I realized that Tim Hortons, the café, didn’t even make this beverage. Other then that, Canada is amazing. The people here are very kind and gentle. If I have trouble finding the road, people come and help me right away. There are also various types of foods from different cultures such as Greek, Italian, Korean, and Japan. We have a variety of foods in my country, but it is not as easy to find like here. Anyway, I really enjoyed interacting with people, seeing nature, and experiencing the culture of Canada. After I practice and get better at English, I will go back there again.

I thought think they don`t couldn't understand me because of my pronunciation.

NOTE: you can use "couldn't" or "didn't" whichever one you want

After one month, I realized that Timhorton Tim Hortons, the cafe, didn't even make this beverage. don`t have a americano after 1 month.
So it`s happening.

Other then that, Canada is amazing. The people here are very kind and gentle.
If i find road, People are come to frist and help me. If I have trouble finding the road, people come and help me right away.

There are a also various types of foods from different cultures such as Greek, Italian, Korean, Japan. another country food such as greek, ltalian, korea, japan, jamaica ect

It was good. We can`t easily find vorious country food like canada. We have a variety of foods in my country, but it is not as easy to find like here.

Nature, sky, culture, people ~ i like everyting Anyway, I really enjoyed interacting with people, seeing nature, and experiencing the culture of Canada.
After I practice and get better at English, I will definitely go back there again.

NOTE: "definitely" means "without doubt or uncertainty" like absolutely

for example: "I will go to Korea" and "I will definitely go to Korea" the second sentence is stronger because you are emphasizing that you WILL go

Should I Am i say this when I take my at test? Lol
Writing is easier than speaking :pp 

Thanks to for reading! Have a good day!