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International Tourism Market is Changing (3)
It is estimated that, because of/due to the online travel and [non-standard]/various styles of accommodation, (the) consumption patterns of/in tourism are have changed. In the a short time/Soon, travel will be the first choice of thepeople [during]/on the holiday. In addition, the regional tourism is more important/[will prevail]. Due to If differences/variations in (the) language and culture gap of the neighboring areas is not really obvious, makes peopleare more willing to travel in/around a larger region; for example, when people (come to) visit Europe, they (always would) like to travel around more countries around : France, Germany, Italy, Switzerland [Italia, Suisse]…International tourism market is changing (3)
It is estimated that Because of the online travel and non-standard accommodation, the consumption patterns of tourism are changing. In the a short time, travel will be the people's first choice of the people during the holidays. In addition particular, the regional tourism will prevail dominate. Due to Since the language and culture gap of the neighboring areas is not really obvious significant, makes people are more willing to travel within large regions. For example, when people come to visit Europe, they always would like to travel to more neighboring countries around such as France, Germany, Italy, Switzerland, etc. In other side On the other hand, thanks to the development of information networks, makes young people are becoming more and more like “free walkers.” That is to say, they prefer planning travel routes themselves rather than travel with a group. According to a survey in 2016, Bangkok, London, Paris, Dubai, among other such vacation industry and consumer countries, have become the popular travel destinations. in This year, leisure vacation travel will become the focus of the tourism market, realize from the giving purpose to the vacation industry.END
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International Tourism Market is Changing (3)
[continued]On the other hand side, thanks to the development of information networks * makes young people are becominges (more and) *more independent travellers/[“free walker”] ; they prefer planning travel routes themselves, rather than travel with/in a group. According to a survey in 2016, Bangkok, London, Paris, Dubai… such vacationing of (consumers in) the holiday/travel industry and these consumer countries has have become the popular travel destinations in this year. Leisure holidays/[vacations ] will become the focus of the tourism market, realize from and the purpose of to the holiday/vacationing industry.
* or the development of information networks is making/helping young people become independent travellers
* young people are becoming more independent as travellers / young people are becoming independent travellers
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