Funny day

Fun Day

It is so hot in Sanya, China. I had classes from 8 AM to 12 noon today. I am sooooo...tired but it was fun. My language partner shared a picture of the super moon with me. It was very pretty. After lunch I went to my part-time job, which is teaching Chinese for a primary school student. It's so cool.

Your message was very clear. You wrote about your morning in class and then your afternoon tutoring. 

1 - If you taught an entire class (not just one student) you need to use plural form (students) to make that clear. 

2 - It is unclear if your partner showed you one photo. So, either replace the with a or use plural the form pictures.

3 - It is not necessary to include both after lunch and afternoon. if you talk about something that happens after lunch the reader will understand it is during the afternoon.

Hi there, here are my corrections. I have kept the informal style with the short sentences.  Just be careful with the spacing with the punctuation.

For full-stops and commas we have no space between the last word of the sentence and the full stop.  Then after the full-stop we can use either one or two spaces:

'Sanya. Today'  - No space after 'Sanya', one space before 'Today'

The same is with commas:

'tiring, but funny' - No space after 'tiring', one space before 'but'

Funny day