A paraphrase of the 2nd chapter of the 2nd book about Harry Potter
Hi! I'd like to retell you the 2nd chapter of the book "Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets" - "Dobby's Warning".
Harry comes to his bedroom and see a strange little creature with bat-like ears and orb-like eyes. The name of this creature is Dobby, he's a house-elf. His behavior is bizarre, he permanently cry or knock his head against some things. Dobby tells that he must to punish himself, because he came to Harry without his owner's permission.
At this time Harry's aunt and uncle have guests, they hears strange sounds of the Harry's room. Uncle Vernon goes to this room and threaten Harry.
Dobby tells Harry that it will be horrible things at Hogwarts this year. He pray him to not return to the Hogwarts, but Harry wants to his school very much, he can't live in muggle world. Harry recognize that Dobby was stealing the letters of his friends - Ron, Hermione and Hagrid. Harry perceives his friends' handwriting and tries to take letters away, but Dobby runs down to the ground floor. Harry runs over him. Dobby's in the kitchen. He hangs the Aunt Petunia's festive pudding in the air and pray Harry to not return to the Hogwarts again. Harry refuse, and Dobby drops the pudding on the floor.
Guests are in shock. Aunt and uncle say that Harry is abnormal. Promptly an owl flies in the kitchen and brings Harry a letter. Guests are scared, they are going away.
Uncle Vernon makes Harry read the letter aloud. The letter is from the Ministry of Magic. It says that if Harry will use the magic yet again, he'll be expelled. Uncle rages that Harry hid that he can't conjure outside school.
Uncle lockes Harry in his room and fit the bars, so he won't be able to get to school.
It goes on 3 days. On the night he sees peculiar dreams and hears unusual sounds. He gets up and sees his friend Ron's freckled face at the window.
The end.
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A paraphrase of the 2nd chapter of the 2nd book about Harry Potter
Hi! I'd like to retell to you (or just "retell the...") the 2nd chapter of the book "Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets" - "Dobby's Warning".Harry comes to his bedroom and sees a strange little creature with bat-like ears and orb-like eyes. The name of this creature is Dobby, he's a house-elf. His behavior is bizarre, he permanently is always crying or knocking his head against some things. Dobby tells Harry (?) that he must to punish himself, because he came to Harry without his owner's permission.
At this time Harry's aunt and uncle have guests, they hears strange sounds of the Harry's room. Uncle Vernon goes to this room and threaten Harry.
Dobby tells Harry that there it will be horrible things at Hogwarts this year. He begs pray him to not return to the Hogwarts, but Harry wants to go to his school very much, he can't live in muggle world. Harry recognize that Dobby was stealing the letters of his friends - Ron, Hermione and Hagrid. Harry recognizes perceives his friends' handwriting and tries to take letters away, but Dobby runs down to the ground floor. Harry runs over him (Do you mean "runs after him"?). Dobby's in the kitchen. He hangs the Aunt Petunia's festive pudding in the air and begs pray Harry to not return to the Hogwarts again. Harry refuses, and Dobby drops the pudding on the floor.
The guests are in shock. The aunt and uncle say that Harry is abnormal. Promptly an owl flies into the kitchen and brings Harry a letter. The guests are scared and they leave/go away.
Uncle Vernon makes Harry read the letter aloud. The letter is from the Ministry of Magic. It says that if Harry will uses the magic yet again, he'll be expelled. The uncle rages that Harry hid that he can't conjure outside school.
Uncle Vernon (or "The uncle") locks Harry in his room and fits ("installs" or "puts in" is better) the bars, so he won't be able to get to school.
This goes on for 3 days. One the night he has peculiar dreams and hears unusual sounds. He gets up and sees his friend Ron's freckled face at the window.
The end.
Great job! That must have taken a lot of effort. I know another Russian girl who is reading Harry Potter to practice her English... it must be a popular thing right now :)
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