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A real estate salesman “This house” said the salesman.“ it has both good points and bad points.“ “ l'll show my honest. l'm going to tell you the disadvantages. This house around have a chemical plant one block south and have a slaughter house one block north." "What are the advantages?" inquiry the preconceive buyer. The saleman said," The advantages is you can know which way the wind is blowing."

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A real estate salesman

“This house,” said the salesman,“ it has both good points and bad points. I'll be honest with you/show my honest. l'm  going to tell you the disadvantages  of owning it.

This house around have a chemical plant one block south and have a slaughter house one block north.> There is a chemical plant near this house, which is located one block down the road, and there is also a slaughter house located one block up the road.

" What are the advantages then?" inquired  the potential buyer. The salesman said: "Well, one advantage is that The advantages is you will can know which way the wind is blowing."

This house has a chemical plant nearby > This will mean that the plant belongs to the house.


The salesman said: " vs The salesman said, " > If the phrase is longer than 7 words ( when it's long ) , use colon .

If its short, use comma > He said, " I will be there tonight" / He said : I will be there tonight and I will bring my mum"

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A real estate salesman

“This house” said the salesman.“ it has both good points and bad points.“ “ l'll show my honest. l will be honest with you and first going to tell you the disadvantages. Around this house around have there is a chemical plant one block south and have a slaughterhouse one block north." "What are the advantages?" inquiry the preconceive prospective buyer. The salesman said," The advantages is you can know which way the wind is blowing."
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A real estate salesman

“This house” said the salesman.“ it has both good points and bad points.“ “ l'll show my honest you how honest I am. l'm going to tell you the disadvantages. Near this house around have are a chemical plant one block south and have a slaughter house one block north." "What are the advantages?" inquiriedy the preconceive buyer. The salesman said," The advantages is you can know which way the wind is blowing."


Sorry, I do not know what you mean to say with "preconceive". It is not clear that the buyer had any preconception.

you can know which way the wind is blowing. - As Jean-Luc corrects, "can" is not required, but not incorrect. Personally, I like the feeling with the "can" included.

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A real estate salesman

“This house” said the salesman.“ it has both good points and bad points.“ “ l'll show my honest. I will be very honnest with you and  l'm going to tell you the disadvantages. This house is surrounded by around have a chemical plant one block to the south and have a slaughter house one block to the  north." "What are the advantages?" inquiriedy the preconceived buyer. The saleman said," The advantages is you can know which way the wind is blowing."

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