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Media Media plays an important role in the formation of the decision and effect on the people, The men of Media decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in the newspaper. There are many factors influencing this decision, for example: Economy of the country needs to more details and explain by many articles in newspapers for people care about this field, these topics may be boring on the TV screen. Most of programs broadcast on television are talkshowes , which is consist of two guests have different opinions and each of them explain the advantage of his opinion , this type like a match and attract the viewers and achieved high percentage of watch, there are many studies report that talkshow programs effect large section of people. But in the presence the hot and important news need to show on Tv and print in the newspaper (for example Amircan election press in all tools of media) We become aware of everything take place in the world by the media, which transfer all reports covered all fields (economy, politics, natural disaster, wars, conflicts and even fashion) But in the fact, we watch the many bad news and read a lot of them in news , then we become used to bad news and we lost any compassion or effect. We should to know the fact without any decoration but in another hand there is no need to show more bloody view or gossip on scandals, at this point the media deviates from the main message that is the connection channel between the events and the people to transfer the truth without any manipulation. When good news reported beside the bad ones, this will make balance and not effect on the psycology of people or changes their mood and keep their humanity, we should see many programs talk about Art, Music,health and inspiration, we need these programs to gain the wise and knowledge to judge on another news In the last, Media should show colourful paint beside the blood.

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Media plays an important role in the formation of decisions and effect on the people. The men of Media decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in the newspapers.
There are many factors influencing this decision, for example: the economy of the country needs to explained with many details and explained by using many articles in newspapers for people care, these topics may bore people if they are shown on the TV screen.
Most programs that are broadcasted on television are talk shows , which consist of two guests discussing their different opinions; each of them explaining the advantage of his/her opinion , this is like a (competition) match and attracts viewers and achieves a higher percentage of viewers. There are many reports that talk show programs affect a large section of people. But in reality, the breaking and important news needs to be shown on Tv and printed in the newspaper (for example the American election press should be broadcasted in all forms  of media)
We become aware of everything that takes place in the world by the media, which relays all of the reports covered in fields such as; economy, politics, natural disaster, wars, conflicts and even fashion.
But in fact, we watch many gruesome news broadcasts and read about them in newspapers , then we become used to grim news and we lose any compassion or effect.
We should know the facts without any decoration, but on the other hand there is no need to show bloody view (gruesome pictures)  or gossip about scandals. At this point the media deviates from the main message that is the connection channel between the events and the people to transfer the truth without any manipulation.
When good news is reported beside the frightful ones, this will create a balance and not effect the psychology of people or change their mood- it'll also help to retain their humanity. We should see many programs talk about Art, Music,health and inspiration. We need these programs to gain wisdom and knowledge to judge other news
Finally, media should show colourful pictures instead of the bloody images.

 Great Job! I completely agree with your opinions.   Try to use more full stops (periods) in your writing to make it easier to follow and comprehend.

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