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Correct me please :) THE BEST PLACE TO LIVE IN In my opinion, the best place to live is Mallorca. Mallorca is an island that is in Spain. Isn't very big, but is a place homely. You can find a differents places, from a town to a rural village. Also you can go to the beach or go to the mountain and to do a trip. We have very different beaches. On the one hand, the beach of Arenal is a very big beach. In summer it is full of tourist, especially of German people. On the other hand, we have small beaches. These beaches are the most beautiful in Mallorca, besides there aren't many people and are quieter. In these beaches, the water of the sea is completely transparent, look like Caribean beaches, only missing the palms trees. The weather in Mallorca is warm, but in summer is hot. Sometimes we reach 40ºC. This is time is perfect to go to the beach and bathe in the sea or lie down under the umbrella; but isn't very good weather if you have to go to work. In these cases is necessary to have an air conditioner. The food also very good. The "ensaimada" is very popular food in Mallorca. It is very typical to go to breakfast (or to snack) "ensaimada" with hot chocolate. In conclusion, I advise to visit Mallorca in holidays.

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Correct me please :)

THE BEST PLACE TO LIVE IN

In my opinion, the best place to live is Mallorca.
Mallorca is an island in Spain. It isn't very big but is a homely place. You can find a differents places, from a town to a rural village.  You can go to the beach or go to the mountains or go on a trip. We have very different beaches. On the one hand, the beach of Arenal is a very big beach. In summer it is full of tourists, especially German people. On the other hand, we have small beaches. These beaches are the most beautiful in Mallorca. There aren't many people and they are quieter.  At these beaches the sea is completely transparent like in the Carribean. All that's missing are the palms trees.
The weather in Mallorca is warm, but in summer is hot. Sometimes it reaches 40ºC. This is the perfect time to go to the beach and go in the sea or to lie down under an umbrella; but isn't very good weather if you have to go to work. At these times you need an air conditioner.
The food also very good. The "ensaimada" is very popular food in Mallorca. It is very common to have this for breakfast (or as a snack)  with hot chocolate.

In conclusion you should visit Mallorca on holiday.
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Hello, Estrella! :) We have a local version of the Ensaimada and I love it very much! Anyway, it is better to write the last part about the ensaimada as "It is very typical to have ensaimada with hot chocolate for breakfast and refreshment (snacks)." Great work, now I want to visit Mallorca! :)
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Correct me please :)

THE BEST PLACE TO LIVE IN

In my opinion, the best place to live is Mallorca.
Mallorca is an island near Spain. It isn't very big, but it's a place homely ( no tengo la menor idea de lo que quieres decir). You can find a different places, from a town to a rural village. You can also go to the beach or you can take a trip to the mountains. We have multiple beaches. The beach of Arenal is a very big beach. In the summer it's full of tourist, specially of German tourist. We also have small beaches, these beaches are the most beautiful in Mallorca. There aren't that many people and it's quieter. In these beaches, the water is completely clear it looks like the beaches in the caribbean , except without the palms trees.
The weather in Mallorca is warm, but gets hot in the summer . Sometimes it reaches 40ºC. This is the  perfect time to go to the beach and bathe in the water or lie down under the umbrella; but it isn't the best weather if you're working. In these cases you really need to have an air conditioner.
The food is also very good. The "ensaimada" is a very popular food in Mallorca. It's typical to have "ensaimada" for breakfast or as a snack with hot chocolate.

I would recommend Mallorca for your next vacation.

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