What am I watching now?
I am watching an anime series called “One Piece” on internet, on “pordede.com” website. The series is based on the adventures of a group of pirates. The captain is Luffy and he is a rubber man because he ate some magic nuts. The crew is composed of 5 members, Luffy and his comrades. All members seek the great treasure, “The One Piece”, and for this, they have to visit different very dangerous islands and face great monsters and strong pirates in a mysterious place called “Red line”.
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You can forgo mentioning the internet because pordede.com reveals it all. So it's just fine to write "I am watching an anime series called "One Piece" on pordede.com." I used to follow the series myself and found it really amusing. They're still updating, right? Last thing, you should probably use a stronger word than "visit" because it rather sounds harmless, which is totally at odds with what Luffy and the others actually do when on the islands. Otherwise, it's a really good piece! :)
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