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Correct me thank you:) Hello,everybody,happy to stand here to introduce myself!Today I will bring 3 things to reprent my past,present and future.First,my past is a word:warm. (show my classmates a letter)In the past,I often wrote letters with my friends.Sometimes I am very shy to express my feeling,so letters is a good way. I like to write it, I think it is a special feelings,and it can save for a long time.When you are old,you open the letter ...oh..really sweet and warm!And also letters like a bond.It keeps the relationship between my friends and I.We wrote our sadness,happiness,lost..and so many feelings.Whatever it brought me warm.I like arr.Now,It is a brush.I join the propaganda department to improve my paint.To be a surprise,I met some nice friends in there.I will strick and draw more good pictures.For my future,it likes this lamp.Life is unknown,so it is interesting.Sometimes it will be lose,and sometime it will be bright,I don't know what I can be,but I hope I can overcome difficulties to be a better me.That's all,thank you.

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Correct me thank you:)

Hello, everybody. I am happy to stand here to introduce myself! Today I will bring 3 things to represent my past, present and future. First, my past is a word: warm. (show my classmates a letter). In the past I often wrote letters with my friends. Sometimes I am very shy to express my feelings, so letters are a good way. I like to write it and I think it is a special feeling, and it can last for a long time. When you are old, you open the letter ...oh..really sweet and warm! And also letters are like a bond. It keeps the relationship between my friends and I. We wrote our sadness, happiness, loss .. and so many feelings. Whatever it made me warm I was like ... arr. Now it is a brush. I join the propaganda department to improve my painting.To my surprise, I met some nice friends in there. I will stroke and draw more good pictures. For my future, it is like this lamp. Life is unknown, so it is interesting. Sometimes it will be lose, and sometimes it will be bright. I don't know what I can be, but I hope I can overcome difficulties to be a better me.That's all, thank you.

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Cool ! English is my second language and i can`t write correct sentence. However i read interesting about you`re post :D

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