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its my first time to write my story here i find italki by chance,i have study english from my junior high。i can say out sentences esaily ,but i cant write frequly and corrctly ,now i study english again by using listening app and watching english moive . i have bought a new electrombile,it my first time to ride it on the road ,but its so crowded,and some one who is courier pass me away and carsh me down ,it hurt me very hearvy ,then ,he just stop there ,and look at me ,say"sorry ,it hurt you much ?" i say ,i am ok ,dont worry about me ,u can go .it truthly freak me out ,i dont want ride it more ,but its the time to go to the office ,then i try it again . i am very afriad of ride a bike in a crowded place ,and so many people in qinghe ,but i need wait a bus many time every day ,now its very cold in winter .so i bought a electrombile ,i told myself i can do it ,its a piece of cake ,its just need pratice. when i gone to the big road and saw there so many cars and people ,i am afriad and told myself to keep Keep your shirt on。 then i fall over oneself again on the railroad track of wu dao kou ,this railroad have closed some days ago, cos i ride so slow and the front wheel stuck in the hole of the railroad .it hurted me again .i wanna cry . finally i arrived my office and cant say any words ,but i need cheer up to celebraty my female boss's brithday ,she get us togher and take us to the ba yi lao ye which cook lamp very famous.i dont want to go ,i dont want eat lamp .i just want to stay . in the restaurant ,the waiter get us some noodles free when they konw one of us birthday today .they even get a boy and a girl singing a brithday song for us .one in chinese and one in english .i need to applause and sing this song. even thought its not a very good day ,the food is delicious ,by the way , i dont konw how i ride my electrombile back home ,specially its dark when i off duty . thankyou for your guys reading ,it must have many mistake of my story .now ,i need back my work . ps : i cant use it anymore ,how can i handle it ?

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its my first time to writing my story here

I find found italki by chance. I have studied English from my since junior high. I can say out speak sentences easily, but i can't write frequently and or correctly. Now I am studying English again by using a listening app and watching English movies.

I have bought a new electrombile electric scooter. It is my first time to riding it on the road, but it's so crowded. and Someone who is a courier passed me away and carsh me down crashed into me. It hurt me very hearvy a lot. Then, he just stopped there and looked at me say and said, "sorry, did it hurt you much?" I say said, "I am ok, don't worry about me, you can go." It truthly truly freaked me out. I don't want to ride it anymore. But when it was the time to go to the office, then I tried it again.


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Thank you very much ,I know that,if u want to learn Chinese,I can help u too~^_^
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(I had to post 3 corrections because italki only allows me to write 5000 characters in each.)
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In the restaurant, the waiter get gave us some noodles for free when they knew one of us had a birthday today. They even got a boy and a girl to sing singing a birthday song for us. One was in Chinese, and one was in English. I needed to applaud and sing this song.

Even though it was not a very good day, the food is was delicious. By the way, I don't know how to ride my electrombile electric scooter back home, especially it's dark when I get off duty.

Thank you for your guys reading. My story it must have many mistakes of my story. Now I need to get back to my work.

ps : i can't use it anymore. How can I handle it?
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I am very afraid of riding a bike in crowded places, and there are so many people in qinghe. But i need wait for a bus many times every day. Now its very cold in winter, so i bought an electrombile electric scooter. I told myself i can do it; it's a piece of cake. It just needs practice.
When i gone went to the big road and saw there were so many cars and people, I am was afraid and told myself to keep keep your my shirt on.

Then I fell over oneself again on the railroad track of wu dao kou. This railroad have had closed some days ago. cos Because I ride so slow, and the front wheel stuck in the hole of the railroad. It hurt me again. I wanted to cry.

Finally, i arrived at my office and can't couldn't say any words, but I needed to cheer up to celebrate my female boss's birthday. She got us together and take took us to the ba yi lao ye, which is famous for cooking lamb very famous. I don't didn't want to go, and I don't didn't want to eat lamb. I just wanted to stay.


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