A camping day when I was younger
In order to practice more sentences in past:
About ten years ago when I was twenty years old. I went with some friends to a camping weekend on the beach. We bought a lot of alcohol (around six bottles of vodka and gin). We started to drink in the bus on the way to the beach; in only three hours we drank five of six bottles. We arrived to the beach at night, it was raining a little, we couldn't assemble the tents to sleep because it was very dark and we were very drank, so I decided to do something very stupid and I went to the sea to have a bath to wake up myself from the drunkenness, the sea was very rough, I remembered that a friend of my was on the shore screaming to me "go out, go out now, don't be stupid", she was very angry, fortunately nothing happened to me, just a hit that my friend gave to me for be a stupid :D. However my plan worked well because I was able to assemble my tent and I did it just in time because at that moment started to rain cats and dog. All my eight friends slept in my tent, next morning we assembled the rest of the tents :D.
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A camping day when I was younger
In order to practice more sentences in the past:About ten years ago when I was twenty years old, I went with some friends to a camping weekend on the beach. We bought a lot of alcohol (around six bottles of vodka and gin). We started to drink in the bus on the way to the beach; in only three hours we drank five of the six bottles. We arrived at the beach at night, it was raining a little; we couldn't assemble the tents to sleep in because it was very dark and we were very drunk, so I decided to do something very stupid and I went to the sea to have a bath to wake up myself from the drunkenness. The sea was very rough, I remembered that a friend of my was on the shore screaming to me "get out, get out now, don't be stupid", she was very angry, fortunately nothing happened to me, just a punch that my friend gave to me for being stupid :D. However my plan worked well because I was able to assemble my tent and I did it just in time because at that moment it started to rain cats and dogs. All my eight friends slept in my tent; next morning we assembled the rest of the tents :D.
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A camping day when I was younger
In order to practice more sentences in the past:(tense)About ten years ago when I was twenty years old, I went with some friends on a camping weekend to the beach. We bought a lot of alcohol (around six bottles of vodka and gin). We started to drink in the bus on the way to the beach (in only three hours we drank five of six bottles). We arrived at the beach at night and it was raining a little. We couldn't assemble the tents to sleep because it was very dark and we were very drunk, so I decided to do something very stupid and I went to the sea to have a bath to wake myself (up) from the drunkenness. The sea was very rough. I remembered that a friend of mine was on the shore screaming to me "get out, get out now, don't be stupid". She was very angry. Fortunately nothing happened to me, just a hit that my friend gave to me for being so stupid :D. However, my plan worked well because I was able to assemble my tent and I did it just in time because at that moment started to rain cats and dogs. All my eight friends slept in my tent and the next morning we assembled the rest of the tents :D.
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