can you check my sentence? plz~ its about my favorite song :)
hello. im korea female. today, im going to talking about my favorite song :)
these days, i usually listening to hip-hop music.
when i was young, i didn`t like it.
but recently in korea, hip-hop music is trend.
i saw tv show called to `show me the money`
that time, i think i felling in the love at hip-hop
it`s hip-hop survival tv show.
among all seasons, i like season4 and season5
l usually listening to pop music too
i like drake. he`s song is exciting.
also i listening to english music for improve my english lisening skill :p
thank you for reading,
if you`re fine, check my sentence please.
have a good day !!
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can you check my sentence? plz~ its about my favorite song :)
Hello. I'm a Korean female and today, I'm going to talk about my favorite song :). These days I usually listen to hip-hop [music]. When I was young, I didn't like it but recently in Korea, hip-hop music is in trend. Ii saw a TV show called `show me the money` one time and I think I then fell in love with hip-hop. It's a hip-hop survival TV show. Among all the seasons, I like season 4 and season 5. I usually listen to pop music too. I like Drake. his song is exciting. Also I listen to English music to improve my English listening skill :pthank you for reading,
if you`re fine, check my sentence please.
have a good day !!
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can you check my sentence? plz~ it's about my favorite song :)
Hello. I'm a Korean female. Today, I'm going to talk about my favorite song :)These days, I usually listening to hip-hop music. ('I usually/often + verb' -> do not use -ing)
When I was young, I didn't like it.
But recently in Korea, hip-hop music is trend popular.
I saw a tv show called to `Show me the money`
that time Since then, I think I've fallen in the love at with hip-hop
It`s a hip-hop survival tv show.
Among all seasons, I like season 4 and season 5.
l usually listening to pop music too.
I like Drake. His song is exciting.
Also I listening to English music for to improve my English listening skill :p
Thank you for reading,
If you can, check my sentence please.
Have a good day !!
Good work :)
Cool! I didn't know about this show!
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