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Travel experience We traveled a little abroad., but we always were without a tour guide. But my most emotional experience was the trip to Orlando. I'm still learning English and my hubby can speak Italian. We rented a car and ran around Orlando. We visit 9 parks International Drive is so big. Oh my God. It seems like a highway, for us. I was afraid of roller coaster. I rode only in three of them; my husband in almost was possible for him. And about the big wheel. I think that's is the biggest in the world.Isn't it? I loved the shopping malls and to eat turkey leg, ribs and a kind of bread with raisin. The hot dog (that I ate there) is a little different from our, because I realized it was filled with beans also. We visited Cape Kennedy. Here in Brazil there are employees in gas stations. It was our first time that we put flue in the petrol tank. But everything worked fine. I hope in God, one day visit United States again. On the oyher hand, I hope you can visit Brazil. It's a beautiful country. We have marvelous beaches; in my city there's the most famous draft beer in Brazil. Our carnival is amazing. It's a really show. About the music! Brazilian musics are wonderful. Come to visit Brazil!

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Travel experience

We traveled a little abroad., but we always were without a tour guide.
But my most emotional experience was the trip to Orlando.
I'm still learning English and my hubby can speak Italian.
We rented a car and ran moved around Orlando. We visitED 9 parks
International Drive is so big  difficult.  Oh my God!! It seems like a highway, for us.
I was afraid of the roller coaster. I rode on only in three of them; my husband in almost  it was almost impossible for him.
And about  As for the big wheel, I think that's it is the biggest in the world. Isn't it?
I loved the shopping malls and to eat eating turkey leg, ribs and a kind of bread with raisin.
The hot dog (that I ate there) is (was)  a little different from ours, because I realized it was filled with beans also.
We visited Cape Kennedy.
Here in Brazil there are employees in gas stations. It was our first time that we put flue  fuel in the petrol tank (ourselves). But everything worked fine.
I hope in God, that one day we wil  visit United States again.
On the other hand, I hope you can visit Brazil. It's a beautiful country.

We have marvelous beaches; in my city there's the most famous draft beer in Brazil.
Our carnival is amazing. It's a really (PUT ADJECTIVE HERE ) show.
About As for  the music, Brazilian musics are is wonderful.
Come to visit Brazil!

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