汉语的第一 ?

第一次用汉语写作？

昨晚，我的两个好友送了我礼物，她们还为我唱了“生日快乐”歌。不过那是用韩语唱的，因为她们喜欢韩语。我没想到她们竟然会(to emphasize how surprised you were)记得我的生日。谢谢你们。我爱你们，Dal 和 Pikah。

除此之外(Apart from that)，我好想我妈妈。今天，我给她打了通电话。但是光听她的声音无以慰藉我想见她的心情(This sentence might be too difficult for a beginner) 。我明白我已（already)长大，不该过度依赖妈妈。但此刻，我不知该如何是好(I don't know what to do)。没有了妈妈的陪伴，我变得如此脆弱。

*Wow!Can't believe it's your first time.Way to go,Atika!

And here're some tips on Chinese writing:

a.The word"今日“sounds very formal.(Tak lisan.)If you intend to write something elegant or formal,"今日”would be the right one to pick.However,in this case,I believe"今天“is more appropriate.By the way,"昨晚”sounds more formal than "昨天晚上“.

b.Punctuation and conjunctions really matter a lot,which contribute to fluency.We Chinese simply can't get them enough when write something.We do use them very often.

c.The word"了”is the most tricky one.The only way to master it is more reading as well as more practice.

Hope it can help.And wish that one day you can do excellent Chinese writing that others cannot tell where are you from!

Actually,I've been majored in bahasa Melayu for 3 months.Good luck to both of us!:)

汉语的第一 ?

汉语的第一 ?