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Almost die This morning I drove my car on the highway. It was raining very hard today. I drove very fast, almost 80 kpm. When I saw the kpm I was freaking out and put on the brake suddenly. That makes the tire was flat, my car were sliding for a long and it went around. I lose control of the wheel. I was freaking out and my head said " no no no no don't die don't die. you couldn't die like this". It happened very fast. Just 5-6 second and I could control my car again. My head and my leg were shaking after that. I have to calm down and move forward until I find some place to parking. Now I have to find a way to fix my car and do something with insurance.

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Almost died

This morning I drove my car on the highway. It was raining very hard. I drove very fast, almost 80 km/h. When I saw the km/h I was freaking out and put on the brake suddenly. That made the tire flat and my car slid for a while and it turned around. I lost control of the wheel. I was freaking out and my head said " no no no no don't die, don't die. you shouldn't die like this". It happened very fast. Just 5 to 6 seconds and I could control my car again. My head and my leg were shaking after that. I have to calm down and move forward until I find some place to park. Now I have to find a way to fix my car and do something with the insurance.

Very well written!

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thank you for correcting me
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Well Down! Almost Prished Too fast. 80 km/h. I lost control of the wheel. I think you should use simple words, and pay attention more to punctuation.

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