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Good news for my family My sister is pregnant for second time, he has a little girl. She is almost 2 years old, I love her so much, when we are together she makes my days happy. Today, my sister went to the doctor in order to know the sex of her baby, she just called me on, and she told me that her baby is a boy, he is well and healthy. I’m so happy! My niece will have a brother, I can imagine them playing together, it will be a mad thing.

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Good news for my family

My sister is pregnant for a second time, she has a little girl already. She is almost 2 years old; I love her so much, when we are together she makes my days happy.

Today, my sister went to the doctor in order to know the sex (you could use the word "gender" instead of sex - this would be better) of her baby, she just called me on, and she told me that her baby is a boy and he is well and healthy. I’m so happy! My niece will have a brother; I can imagine them playing together, it will be a mad  (mad means angry or crazy in English - you need a different adjective here) thing.

 

Great entry!  Something to watch out for:  run-on sentences; that is, sentences that go on without the correct punctuation or conjunction.  When you write a complete sentence ("My niece will have a brother") and then you follow it with a phrase that could also be a complete sentence ("I can imagine them playing together") and these two ideas are related, it is best to either connect them with a semi-colon (;) or with a conjunction such as "and" - this will improve the flow in your writing!

 

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Good news for my family

My sister is pregnant for the second time, she has a little girl. She is almost 2 years old, I love her so much, when we are together she makes my days happy.

Today, my sister went to the doctor in order to know the gender of her baby, she just called me, and she told me that her baby is a boy, and he is well and healthy. I’m so happy! My niece will have a brother, I can imagine them playing together, it will be a disaster.

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