Trying my english, part two (2)
For this post, I've decided to make some interesting about traveling.
Travel expand our capacity for wonder, beliefs, health and live. Traveling give us joy and appreciation of the amazing diversity on our lovely planet. Allows us to see the great and outstanding difference between your neutral life from others and gives you a new perspective on life. I always thought that having this experience of living something ''for the first time'' is one of the best feelings ever. I could also realize that being away makes you appreciate more your family and home.
Whenever you are traveling alone or with someone. you will be challenged by the real world by dealing with difficult situations. Where you can find your self-confidence and it doesn't matter what happens, there is a way around the problem and knowing that you can deal with these situations is a big boost to self-confidence and therefore your happiness.
I would like to receive feedbacks about the grammar on this paragraphs above, Thanks :)
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Trying my english, part two (2)
For this post, I've decided to make some interesting about travelling.Travel expands our capacity for wonder, beliefs, health and life. Travelling gives us joy and appreciation of the amazing diversity on our lovely planet. It allows us to see the great and outstanding differences between your neutral life from others other types life and yourself (I think this is what you meant) and gives you a new perspective on life. I always thought that having this experience of living/experiancing something ''for the first time'' is one of the best feelings ever. It could also make you realize that being away makes you appreciate more your family and home more.
Whenever you are travelling alone or with someone. you will be challenged by the real world by dealing with difficult situations. Where you can find your self-confidence and it doesn't matter what happens, there is a way around the problem. and Knowing that you can deal with these situations is a big boost to self-confidence and therefore your happiness.
I would like to receive feedbacks about the grammar on this paragraphs above, Thanks :)
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